An Ancient Evil
By Draco664
i don't know why, but i was in tears by the end of this fic. again, excellent fanfiction.
OOH, now this is interesting, are you going to continue it?
Meh. If Harry was responsible for all the mayhem and death, why would he stay in the forest? (He wouldn't.)
This was a disturbing but funny read. I can understand why you didn't continue it, since it only can go in insane directions, or possibly into a beautyandthebeasty fairytale mess. If you ever need
to just clean your teeth on something, i wouldn't mind a second chapter.
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Lol, great story! I'd like to see what happens to Harry and if he can be rehabilitated. Cheers
I liked that. I loved how you had us building up to believe the vampire was the being, when it was really Harry!
"Are we hungry?"
"Not if you're cooking."
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Those two lines made me laugh hysterically. This is such a brilliant story. Very creepy.
You beat me to an idea I had. I few differences with mine and yours was that Harry was sealed with the lives of the deatheaters and voldemort in a statue and said statue was used as the replacement for the broken one at the ministry. 5 years pass and BAM. Harry is unleashed talking to himself and arguing with all the minds trapped in him, destroying everything.
this story was getting good though!!
too bad you discontinued it...
is there a chance that you will continue this story? i hope so...
Ouch! Great short though, wow what a messed up setup. Great job with what happened to vampire boy but wow is harry/voldie a mess. Good job with dumbles discussion with tonks also. Cheers!
ok... i'm glad you stop it, it's too twist anyway.
Nasty piece of fiction here. But good, anyway. Keep up the good work
Now that would make a interesting story if you continued. Very good.
A haunting story. Quite a terrifying idea! To think that killing Voldemort would create an insane, evil Harry! Quite an imaginative story. Thanks for writing. pms
Wow, this was great! A one shot drabble you say? Hmm, I think you should continue with it, and see where it takes you! --K
Ooohh! Now THAT is an interesting way to start a fic! Is he insane? or did both he and voldimort combine somehow? or... well, I suppose I just have to wait and see yes?
Wow, man, that's screwed up. You have a sick and twisted mind! LoL
Anyway, that was a well written piece. I really enjoyed how you said so much with so little! And the idea that harry would be driven insane after the Last Battle, then turn into an amorphous being is fresh and original, and your use of the pause is masterful! I very much enjoy your stories, and hope you continue to update them. Master Potter is also a fresh new approach to the idea of "apprentice harry" and I hope you continue to update that story arc. Anyway, cheers and wishing you a Happy Spring!