Apprentice Potter
By Draco664
Name: A. W.
Chapter: Consequenses
Posted On: Monday 27th November 2006 4:45pm
I can understand making the occasional error in spelling, but on a chapter title? it is 'consequences'.
Name: Patches
Chapter: Consequenses
Posted On: Tuesday 2nd May 2006 12:57am
This is good. Harry is taking control of his like and responsibility for his own actions. I'm glad Hermione is there. She is someone he can talk to. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks, pms
Name: M. R. Moore
Chapter: Consequenses
Posted On: Monday 26th September 2005 10:00pm
I think you should have added another very to the summary.
Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Consequenses
Posted On: Wednesday 31st August 2005 8:45am
Ok, he is not happy...lol.
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The chapter title ought to be "Consequences"...