Apprentice Potter
By Draco664
I have only one beef.
The story says
"but the fact that every person who had a Dark Mark was now a pile of ash was fairly convincing to the rest of the population that Voldy was gone."
If this is the case, how come Snape is still alive to judge Harry & Zab's potion? We all know Snape has a Dark Mark on his arm.
well globaly a good story but two things :
magic wandmagic at least does NOT require incantations and/or wand mouvements !
anyone with a little logic could have understood this fact while reading HP and the sorcerer's stone
I would leave a review, but I am speechless at the moment. What a twisted path you led us on, what fluid motion, what a story! Send me an owl with your next story. Hagrid
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I lost this story a few months ago, when my computer caught a virus and I've been searching for it ever sense I got it back!
You need to post to more sites!
It satisfied my lust for Deatheater blood
Very good. Loved the story.
gunny
*Amazing*. The stupidity and intransigence of some in the Ministry never ceases to amaze (and amuse) me. Potter (and other) rediscover an improved potion that not only improves magical strength,
it actually helps with both Occlumency and Legilimency (even granting those skills at a basic level where they don't exist at all). The Department of Magical Law Enforcement (not to mention the
Wizengamot) would almost *kill* for rights to this potion!
And the theory of Remote Casting is proven once again, completely trainwrecking two major theories of magic in the process. Not even Snape can wish it away (since it happened right in front of him);
in fact, he looked paler than the Bloody Baron! (He'd apparently make a really bad ghost.)
Outstanding story! I enjoyed it tremendously.
You have a small problem you need to address, however. Snape has the Dark Mark on his arm. It has killed everyone else but you have given no reason why he survived. He was an active member at the time of Voldemort's demise so he would have had the same Dark Mark as everyoe else.