Apprentice Potter
By Draco664
Name: Decumo9
Chapter: Evasion
Posted On: Sunday 2nd March 2008 8:16pm
A random burst of curiosity, but are you going to pair Tonks with Remus, like 99 percent of other fanfic writers?
Name: Lana
Chapter: Evasion
Posted On: Tuesday 26th September 2006 7:34am
Eh. I can't finish reading this. Harry is just too annoying.
Name: Samantha
Chapter: Evasion
Posted On: Thursday 20th July 2006 4:19am
So far I am enjoying this very much, which is surprising because I normally dislike reading in the first person. Looking forward to seeing where you are going with this.
Name: Patches
Chapter: Evasion
Posted On: Tuesday 2nd May 2006 2:59am
Harry is not doing well. Dumbledore has made a lot of mistakes but he is on the side of right. At least I hope he is in this story. It is never a good idea to assume everyone is out to get you. I
look forward to seeing where you are going with this.
Thanks, pms
Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Evasion
Posted On: Wednesday 31st August 2005 10:58am
Still liking the story.
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ok, i'm finally reviewing after reading this story for the second time, lol. i got to say this tho. Tonks is WAY, WAY OOC...Blonde and well built, wtf, tonks ain't shallow, hense her falling in love with Remus, but it is after all your story, and if you want some charactors to act really OOC than hey who am i to argue(like Harry being a ******* idiot, its ok to have a really angry Harry, but him bitching McGonagall out was totally wrong, be angry at the right people, Fudge, Umbridge and Dumbledore, i think the OOC tonks shoulda did more than dug her fingernails into Harry, but thats neither here nor there...), like i said, just a few minor(imo) charactor flaws to an otherwise wonderful story...but of course i wouldn't be reading it again if i didn't think it wasn't any good. so i'll be reading on, hoping you finish the 3rd chapter of this series soon. :)