Apprentice Potter

Great story, loving the taking the fight to dumbles like that. You really explore Occlumency and Ligilimency with a lot more detail than most fanfic authors, bravo is all I'll say to that.

"After all, if my daughter was turned to stone at school, I'd seriously consider other, less-dangerous, education establishments, though given recent events, a school set up next to a fusion plant built by and staffed with people suffering from Parkinson's Disease would be a safer choice than Hogwarts." This has to be in contention for the best line of the story so far.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

Ok. I really like the story. It gets more interesting as more people get involved. Zab is not going to want Harry to go different places any time soon if this is what happens when he goes to visit his friends. I'm really surprised that Ron stood up for Ron like he did. It really helped that Ron now has better understanding of other people thanks to the input from the brain attack. Very good use of things we have learned other places by the way.
Thanks for writing. pms

Damn! Go Harry! Kick old Dumbly's ass! That was good to see.

Very good. Really good stuff.

gunny