Apprentice Potter
By Draco664
Moody is cool! I like Moody. He actually seems to want what Harry wants and needs, rather than what the Wizarding world seems to want or need, or even think they do. Yeah, Moody!
Moody's awesome.
I'm enjoying your story. Something is not "right" about Harry's anger. He is out of control, even for a young teenager. Speaking of which, I think you've made him too self aware. No one has worked
with him enough for him to have overcome the obstacles of life (Dursley's, abuse, etc.). Unless he spent time studying the world he should be less aware of some things.
Wow! Harry finally got through to Snape and Dumbledore and told Tonks some things that she had thought were fiction. Quite and enlightening chapter. Thanks, I look forward to more. pms
Great chapter. I really enjoyed Dumbledore being dressed down like that. He did fuck up an awful lot in Harry's life, without ever being asked for his dubious help, didn't he? About time he
experienced some backlash.
Quizer
I started reading this after 2 events, running out of new material from Jeconais, kinsfire, Dorothy, Bob and Alyx and Kokopelli, and 2nd - trusting that it would be good if Tim let you be one of
this stable. I am so glad that I did - loving this so far - fabulous to see Harry blow up and, so far get away with, shoving the 'authorities' of the wizarding world exactly how out of touch with
reality they are.
Great work - Thanks
Very good chapter.
gunny
He is nervous about Moody stunning him, but he isn't concerned about Snape or Dumbledore...that doesn't really seem to fit.
Moody is a paranoid old man, who lost an eye, leg, and nose to dark wizards. That doesn't exactly imbue me with confidence in his abilities.