Apprentice Potter

Thats a great start. I like the use of Harry's pov. Will you keep it like that all the way through?

The jokes are good too, particularly Moody's eye needing a passport.

Standard opening, well done except for Harry's philosophical errors.

This would be cliché except it is supposedly an early, and good, example of the genre.

Ok. Angry Harry. I can really understand that! Really surprising that Vernon would stop Dudley though. Very well done. Thanks for writing. pms

great job!!!!!!!!!!
i just heard about you on fanfiction.(your famous with some select people)
what kind of restrictions are they setting.......
must of been pretty bad for you to delete all your stories!!!!!
.......ill finish reading what you wrote now.......... keep up the with the sarcastic remarks.......LOVE THEM&THIS STORY!!!!

Good start.

gunny

hey this is really good. i finally found the password to my old account on fanfiction, and i saw that one of my favorite stories of all time had disappeared, snape's worst nightmare. i love that one. anyways, i am just getting around to reading this one, and i love it. great job!