Burning Desire

Great, you've given us another phrase that SHOULD NEVER APPEAR IN PRINT! "...He covered the phoenix-wizard with love."

Ew! This was supposed to be "phoenix romance" not phoenix slash / squick! >:()

I'm sorry, but the last line of this little one0shot made me cry with laughter. i loved it, well done.

I love this side chapter, is it possible to extend it at all. that is a great idea of a couple. thank you.

I liked reading your fanfic so much... ^-^

I just came across this pair in another site and i'he seaching for them so much. this is the second fanfic I read.

I thought You would like seeing the other fanfic so I send you the link.

http://www.fanfiction.net/book/Harry_Potter/14/0/1/1/0/1/15286/0/0/1/

It's the only fanfic there... hope you like it as much as me

bye bye

AM001

Wow... you don't suppose you will continue this story later?
excuse my bad english, english is my secondary language

An interesting story. On the pyramids, though, I've been inside the second largest one (the one with the limestone still on top), and the chamber is far from massive. It's the size of a large bedroom, and, considering the size of the pyramid, massive is not the way to describe it. The corridor to reach it is small and cramped. Most of the time you walk and climb doubled over.

Aww, that was so sweet! So Harry's a father at sixteen, I wonder how he'll handle the news...

...Mmph...Nhn... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved it.

Great story, are you going to continue it?

like it. good. surprisingly wholesome story.

good

This is great, I'm going to have to go back and read the whole story now!

I loved it! I wonder what Harry would do if he ever found out...

That was brilliant. I have read one other Harry/Fawkes fic and I don't find them weird. Maybe it's just because the ones I've read aren't disgustingly written. Who knows. Either way, I liked this one. Cheers.

~Ivy

wow that was like spaztasticlly good man i loved the pairing strange as it is and i hope to have a continuantion of this story is their one? if so plwase send it to me. i would love to see if harry is able to get his freind forgiveness and how the relationship between the to grows who bottomed? and does harry know about his child .... what is his child? half-phoenix of whole i really would love to know

I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON

Wonderful! A beautifully written and polished piece, emotive, sensual and satisfying to read. Thanks for a great reading experience.

vheritas@aapt.net.au

Dude, is this a one-shot or will you continue it? it would be good to see

(PS: I slightly remember another pairing like this on FF.net.....)

That was really sweet. :d

sue

This is unbelievably beautfiul. I swear, even if it started as a joke, I still find it one of the better writings I've read where Fawkes had a concious thought process.

And I love your lessons between Harry and Fawkes. It was very touching. My favorite lesson was about the warrior and how his belief that he would die would kill him.

You did excellent research and I'm so happy how your intimate scene between Fawkes and Harry was very tasteful. Also, I loved your ending! A promise to return, a baby pheonix, and Dumbledore fainting were the best ways to end what was surprisingly one of my better reads in this fandom.

P.S. Harry/Ginny may be a battleship but I think this dingy is well-made abd one-of-a-kind. You can't say that all the time about the battleship, can you?