Journeyman Potter
By Draco664
Oh boy is the Vatican going to be cheesed! Heh, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
A good chapter, corruption in the police and in the palace. I don't buy that Waldorf made his move without the ok of the big guy. That dog and pony show smelled.
On a side note The-Place-That-etc is a dead link now. I tried it and it's kaput.
Please! Puhleeze update soon!!!
I'm waiting to see the Pope hand Waldorf's head to him and Waldorf's expression when he realizes he has cost the Vatican it's archive of cursed objects.
Please please (on bended knees here) update soon
He's going to take the basilisk to the Chamber of Secrets isn't he.
is there a mailing list i can sign up for so i'm emailed when you update? your story is incredible! sorry- my email profshwerner@gmail.com
is there a mailing list i can sign up for so i'm emailed when you update? your story is incredible!
Oh please oh please oh please tell me you'll be updating this soon? Pretty Please?
This has been the only fic written in first person that I enjoyed enough to disregard the format it was written. Well done. I look forward to it being finished.
love ^^ cant wait to see what Harry's gonna do with a pet Basilisk lol. wonder if its gonna live for long... ahwell, really enjoyed the fic la, looking forward to the next installment
I have been reading your stories for a few days now - Apprentice Potter & Journeyman and I have to say you have captured my mind completely with your story, your character believeability and
the action sequences. And, I DO love an Angry!Harry.
The way you have been using Ron as the one watching Harry's back is also much appreciated. Usually Ron is relegated to comic relief roles. I like a big powerful guy.
Keep writing and send more soon! I think Hogwarts will be getting another Basilisk soon along with a storehouse of very dark objects! ;-) Nice! I want to see Waldorf's face when that happens!
Thank again,
Gary V - Rhode Island
I re-read my review and it read like it was coming from a pompous jackass. I meant everything I said but it doesn't properly convey the fact that I think you are an incredibly talented writer. - Erik
Well, except for the fact that this seems to be more Catholic bashing, it is an interesting story and you do have some talent. If I tell myself that this is just a fictional spin - simply to entertain, I find it enjoyable but I definitely wish you didn't go there "Jesus being a powerful wizard." Still, the other elements were entertaining and I plan on finishing this story.
I was bored the last couple days, so I reread all of this story and Apprentice Potter. I have to say, it's one of my favorite fanfic stories. I love the tension between H/Hr/B. I hope that Harry and Hermione get back together, but given Blaise's reaction to Hermione's lack of faith in Harry, I'm not sure if that would work well or not. I'm very much looking forward to Harry's conversation with Hermione. The action in the story is good too. Harry's remote casting is fairly original, and I like how you're dealing with the Horcruxes (horcruces? whatever.) I hope you find time to keep working on this story even with your new child. Congratulations (rather late) on that by the way. Anyway, thanks for keeping me entertained for the last two days!
Nice. Empty it all into the Chamber of secrets.
:)
Amazing story, amazing cliffhanger.
I can't wait for the next chapter
Update soon please! Can't wait for more!
Just read the other reviews and realized that I am not alone in guessing that the Vatican is going to be missing not only the cache but the bloody snake as well.
Would love to see a penvsive of the Pope's and his Main Wizard's reaction.
Can we guess that Waldorf is going to be replaced!
Or even... for going against the Pope's wishes.
dave
You evil so and so.
I know what you are going to do.
Please update soon so I can confirm my guess. or
I will not say so here, but if you could just drop a line to me at dave@netconnect.com.au and I will tell you my guess.
dave
Great story! I am extremely interested in how Harry is going to use this portkey to save the basilisk... assuming that is what is happening...
“Speak your mind, young one.”
Its over five weeks and still no update ???
What gives.
Outstanding chapter, looks like it is going to hit the fan. I think Harry is going to move everything to the Chamber. That will frost everyone...lol.