gtgrouch posted a comment on Monday 11th August 2014 4:07am for 'Crux Finale

Clever, creative, and very hard for me to stop reading! I want to know what happens but I'm sorry it's near the end of the story.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 1:38pm for 'Crux Finale

Outstanding chapter, Harry needs to really teach Draco about pain.

gunny

smog2187 posted a comment on Thursday 28th February 2008 3:13pm for 'Crux Finale

Another great chapter though I did find Malfoy to be way too pathetic. It's no fun when all the baddies are so incompetent.

On a side note, the status of the story says 'completed' when I look at the chapter overview of this story.

Anyway, thanks for writing. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter as always!

Bedrup posted a comment on Wednesday 27th February 2008 1:30pm for 'Crux Finale

Oy. Chap 17 has disappeared. Magic?

Korisovra posted a comment on Monday 11th February 2008 6:46pm for 'Crux Finale

Excellent story as always. Now...........Update!

Tolias posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 3:15pm for 'Crux Finale

Moaaaaaaaaarr!

Anansii posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd January 2008 11:14pm for 'Crux Finale

You do realize that after this episode, Our Hero is going to have to introduce himself as "Potter. Harry Potter."

Mind you, I LIKE James Bond. :)

Keep up the good work - this is fun!

Terdwilicker posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2008 5:48pm for 'Crux Finale

Raising a child is a lot of work, but I hope things will calm down enough that you can update this story someday.

Craig St.Onge posted a comment on Saturday 12th January 2008 6:47am for 'Crux Finale

Well, I was reareading this story, and only had one question. Does Harry have the ability to remote-cast from Voldemort's wand as well as his own?

just something I thought about and realised that it was not really addressed, except for Harry feeling a slightly less amount of connection when he originally got it.

Just a little something to ask, tis all.
Thanks for your time,
Craig

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 9:33pm for 'Crux Finale

Awesome! It's sure been a while, but well worth the wait!

Aelita posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 5:57pm for 'Crux Finale

I really hope you have another chapter coming out...this story is so good!

KingDark posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 4:17am for 'Crux Finale

well, I really liked the story so far, although the firt person respective can be confusing sometimes.
When you update, I will be posting my review immediatly.
oh, and here and there you forgot simple words, I noticed it several times, but it isn't really annoying.

finally, there is something that can bother me.
anyway or anyways.

I prefer the anyway version of it. the anywayS version can bother me...

oh well, keep it up

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Tuesday 1st January 2008 3:09am for 'Crux Finale

Well. Aside from the ever present complaint about Dobby's grammer - very hard to get right and irritating even when it is correct. Isn't Malfoy dead yet? He certainly has had three run ins with an enraged Boy-Who-Lives, and so has one of the best survival rates of the lot of them.

One hole in your reasoning - I missed where Harry became competant enough with wandless magic to jinx a broom, something I always understood to be reasonably difficult, but I suppose adrenalin could account for many things.

Please update soon, you have left us with something of a cliffhanger after all.

jpotterny posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2007 4:41pm for 'Crux Finale

a wonderful story, please keep it up as you can. Congrats on the baby.


Jim

Lang posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 8:21am for 'Crux Finale

Hey Draco664,

I just started reading your stories. I've thoroughly enjoyed Apprentice and Journeyman Potter thus far.

I especially enjoy the little conversations Harry has with himself.

This may be a little late but, congratulations on the new addition to the family.

Can't wait for the next chapter,
Lang

smog2187 posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2007 4:38am for 'Crux Finale

I originally read Apprentice Potter a couple years ago and found it to be a great read, and just this weekend I found that this sequel and let me say that you have another great story coming along.

Though I didn't like how you made Harry so excessively angry, Snape so damn petty and how Harry manages to "guess" everything that's going on, I'll still keep reading because of the immersive story and great writing style which apart from what I mentioned, depict the characters is what I consider to be an accurate manner.

Thanks for writing

inDe_eD posted a comment on Thursday 29th November 2007 12:51pm for 'Crux Finale

Brilliant as always. I've been reading this fic and its predecessor on/off for a couple of years, and if anything it's gotten better with time.

Best of luck with your child - don't have one personally but from the few times I've covered for more, er, "fortunate" friends they can be quite a handful. I imagine it's worth it an infinite amount of times over, though.

ahsun92 posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 4:09pm for 'Crux Finale

WOW. I have become hooked!
Love it all!
Keep up the good work!

Highschool Nerd posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 4:10pm for 'Crux Finale

Wonderful!

Jarvey posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 10:47pm for 'Crux Finale

It's great to see this story updated... it's quite an excellent tale!