Journeyman Potter
By Draco664
Another great chapter though I did find Malfoy to be way too pathetic. It's no fun when all the baddies are so incompetent.
On a side note, the status of the story says 'completed' when I look at the chapter overview of this story.
Anyway, thanks for writing. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter as always!
Oy. Chap 17 has disappeared. Magic?
Excellent story as always. Now...........Update!
You do realize that after this episode, Our Hero is going to have to introduce himself as "Potter. Harry Potter."
Mind you, I LIKE James Bond. :)
Keep up the good work - this is fun!
Raising a child is a lot of work, but I hope things will calm down enough that you can update this story someday.
Well, I was reareading this story, and only had one question. Does Harry have the ability to remote-cast from Voldemort's wand as well as his own?
just something I thought about and realised that it was not really addressed, except for Harry feeling a slightly less amount of connection when he originally got it.
Just a little something to ask, tis all.
Thanks for your time,
Craig
Awesome! It's sure been a while, but well worth the wait!
I really hope you have another chapter coming out...this story is so good!
well, I really liked the story so far, although the firt person respective can be confusing sometimes.
When you update, I will be posting my review immediatly.
oh, and here and there you forgot simple words, I noticed it several times, but it isn't really annoying.
finally, there is something that can bother me.
anyway or anyways.
I prefer the anyway version of it. the anywayS version can bother me...
oh well, keep it up
Well. Aside from the ever present complaint about Dobby's grammer - very hard to get right and irritating even when it is correct. Isn't Malfoy dead yet? He certainly has had three run ins with an
enraged Boy-Who-Lives, and so has one of the best survival rates of the lot of them.
One hole in your reasoning - I missed where Harry became competant enough with wandless magic to jinx a broom, something I always understood to be reasonably difficult, but I suppose adrenalin could
account for many things.
Please update soon, you have left us with something of a cliffhanger after all.
a wonderful story, please keep it up as you can. Congrats on the baby.
Jim
Hey Draco664,
I just started reading your stories. I've thoroughly enjoyed Apprentice and Journeyman Potter thus far.
I especially enjoy the little conversations Harry has with himself.
This may be a little late but, congratulations on the new addition to the family.
Can't wait for the next chapter,
Lang
I originally read Apprentice Potter a couple years ago and found it to be a great read, and just this weekend I found that this sequel and let me say that you have another great story coming
along.
Though I didn't like how you made Harry so excessively angry, Snape so damn petty and how Harry manages to "guess" everything that's going on, I'll still keep reading because of the immersive story
and great writing style which apart from what I mentioned, depict the characters is what I consider to be an accurate manner.
Thanks for writing
Brilliant as always. I've been reading this fic and its predecessor on/off for a couple of years, and if anything it's gotten better with time.
Best of luck with your child - don't have one personally but from the few times I've covered for more, er, "fortunate" friends they can be quite a handful. I imagine it's worth it an infinite amount
of times over, though.
WOW. I have become hooked!
Love it all!
Keep up the good work!
It's great to see this story updated... it's quite an excellent tale!
hey man nice chapter but keep them coming fst it has already been 25 days!!!!!!
Outstanding chapter, Harry needs to really teach Draco about pain.
gunny