Journeyman Potter
By Draco664
Yes, here we go again.
"...but will not forget."
Funny as hell.
Great story. I do hope Riddle will be a very minor part of the story. I eant some good times for Harry stories. The stomp on Harry in as many ways as you can stories get old quick.
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Bummer.
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Oh no, not the ever recurring dead villian comes back to life. Oh god, I hate those stories, but I love the characters. Please, let Riddle be dead or, at least, let him be truly gone after this. Harry can have other enemies, but not the same dead enemy who can't be killed. No, no, no....
Zab looked on the verge of having an apoplexy.
I suggest "Zab looked on the verge of apoplexy. "An apoplexy" isn't something you have; it doesn't sound right to my ears. You could also have said "Zab looked on the verge of having a stroke.", or
"Zab looked on the verge of having a fit of apoplexy."
The only reason I'm bothering to pick this nit is because I love the story, and I want it to be as good as possible!
What can't Hermione know and Zab probably suspects? That Harry isn't as out of touch with the Wizarding world as he pretends? That he is building a spy network? That he is actually the (as yet
unnamed) Minister of Magic? Hmmmm....so many choices.
YEAS! THERE IS A SEQUEL! MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! All hail Draco664!
Very nice intro by the way, I wonder if we'll (that is Harry...) get to meet the rest of the (probably soon to be disgruntled) parenting committee? Perhaps Blaise could compare notes with Dr.'s
Granger and Granger.
Though for that matter I wonder how the rest of the world would take Harry Potter's living arrangements...
Hmmm...it certainly would be Interesting to see the Dursleys again (to prove that Hermione does have a sadistic side?) ...
On a different note...How much money does Harry have now? His original (Potter) inheritance was "close to thirty thousand galleons" and he probably got half (James's, Lily's and his own share...I do
wonder what they decided to do with Wormtail's share-maybe donated it to a rat extermination company?) of the Black fortune (which was probably significantly larger, since the Blacks were an old,
established pureblood family...though, granted, so were the Gaunts...), plus he is a full partner in the WWW....Ok so he is probably pretty damn rich. Maybe around 100k? Bah--not enough information
to really get a feel for it, though he was able to make an 800 galleon downpayment without too much trouble.
Hmmm....I wonder what the "old crowd" (that is the ministry five, or at least Harry's old classmates) are doing? Crap. The timeframe keeps throwing me off. I keep thinking that it's been more than a
year since Harry took his NEWTs/finished the apprenticeship. Luna and Ginny are still in school and not starting up their own newspaper. Though I do wonder about Neville.
Very cool, I am happy to see a continuation of this story. Are you planning on including the Horcrux idea in this?
Finally found you again! :) Yeah! A sequel to Apprentice, I've been waiting for a sequel for ages. ;) Stupid me. Oh well, I got it now :).
This is shaping up to be quite interesting.
2 girls and 1 guy? Surprisingly Zab is not going with a fight.
Still, O'Riddle is back?
Ah, battle to the death all over again. Is this still going to be Harry/Blaise/Hermione or is Harry going to choose someone?
Are multiple marriages allowed in the Wizarding World? Guess it doesn't really matter, its your story, your world. Ergo, you set the rules.
Keep updating please, i would love to read more.
Great chapter, cant wait for the next 1
VERY COOL! I was seriously pissed when I couldn't find Apprentice Potter on Fanfiction any more. I'm extreamly glad I found your new site! Can't wait for the next chapter of Journeyman to come out! I bet it'll be great! ;)
damn, son. humor, supense, action, drama... all rolled into one spectacular chapter; i hope (but don't expect) you'll update quickly. Either way, the wait is worth it for this.
Damn, I love this story, and this universe. Harry is fantastic. Can't wait to see the eventual meeting between Harry and Albus.
Draco,
Glad to see you continuing the Apprentice Potter Story. I really like this new fic, it is in my opinion very well written. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely,
John
Yay threesome! Harry you lucky dog :)