Journeyman Potter

Unexpected ending with a lot of unresolved plots which make this fic less stand alone than most fanfic and professional novels. The pace and the story is very enjoyable and at least Draco's slytherin side appears per moments and Harry is not the only one who has progressed. In the mean time, the old cast continue to cling to power in every possible way and treachery appears not as an esaier way but as the only viable way in the political sphere of the wizarding world. In this view it is a bit to manichean whereas the only powerfull muggle figure (the pope) tries to take less (or only seems?) the treacherous way as the only one (it might be also because he takes more the bible to into its hearts instead of just keeping and seeking power.

Unexpected ending with a lot of unresolved plots which make this fic less stand alone than most fanfic and professional novels. The pace and the story is very enjoyable and at least Draco's slytherin side appears per moments and Harry is not the only one who has progressed. In the mean time, the old cast continue to cling to power in every possible way and treachery appears not as an esaier way but as the only viable way in the political sphere of the wizarding world. In this view it is a bit to manichean whereas the only powerfull muggle figure (the pope) tries to take less (or only seems?) the treacherous way as the only one (it might be also because he takes more the bible to into its hearts instead of just keeping and seeking power.

Great Fic. Can't wait to read the ending.
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Revisiting series, better quality than "Apprentice"?

funny story, cute kid!

does the name "gunn high" mean anything to you?

Your writing is excellent. There is excitement going on all the time. I read some flicks and pray that eventually it will get better but they just drone on and on. Keep up the good work! Best regards

Great story so far. The development of the characters is intriguing. However, I do have one question: If every death eater died at the end of "Apprentice Potter," why isn't Snape dead? It was the dark mark which killed them and Snape still had it, yet he is still alive in this story.

Thanks for writing, keep up the good work
Concealed-Convict

OK Ive got to know where did you come up with this Zab character is he based on a teacher or what? Ive always wanted to know how to play mind games like he does.

Good story.

Oh, I liked this chapter *very* much. Harry wiped the floor with a pompous jerk - nothing new there. But the way Harry humiliated the prick not once but twice, and then allowed him to kill himself with his own wand? On orders from the idiot's own arrogant father? Now that was inspired. I like the backfiring wand trick almost as much as the remote casting and the ability to "push" objects.

Definitely a fun chapter to read.

Yes, I enjoyed it, immensely.

Oh, I love that. Not only using spells but various trinkets and items as well. Very fun!

Yay threesome! Harry you lucky dog :)

Thank You!

Glad to have someone logical on the site to counter kokopelli's nonsense.

Outstanding story.

gunny

Outstanding chapter, Harry needs to really teach Draco about pain.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Outstanding chapter. Good stuff.

gunny

Outstanding chapter, looks like it is going to hit the fan. I think Harry is going to move everything to the Chamber. That will frost everyone...lol.