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mosnterk posted a comment on Wednesday 26th August 2015 6:17pm for Breaking Storm

I really really enjoyed this trilogy and I hope that you can finish it. Seems like a waste of quite the well thought out plot and all the time and hard work writing it all to leave it as it stands. Either way, thank you for writting it.

DazzlingD posted a comment on Saturday 18th July 2015 12:57am for Breaking Storm

I love these stories!

Geneva posted a comment on Monday 9th February 2015 11:06pm for Breaking Storm

Just re-read up to this point. Still dying for the end! :)

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Wednesday 12th November 2014 5:23am for Breaking Storm

Fun story so far and quite an enjoyable read. Harry really is out to remake the entire UK magical society and doing well so far it seems. It shoudl prove interesting to read if Blaze betrayed Harry, which I doubt, or was forced and how her Great Gran managed to get passed the entrapments Harry forced upon him. Thanks for sharing!

Bobsama posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 1:48am for Breaking Storm

It's been my first time reading this trilogy and I must say that, though incomplete, it was quite satisfying. (Especially Journeyman.) You left off here on a tougher note--how and why does Harry lose everything? What were Blaise's motivations (are they as simple as finding/rescuing Zab)? With Harry's previously strong partner apparently out of the picture, what does that leave of Hermione? Not long ago, he didn't want her to be mother of his children (which basically cuts her out, though there's been no formalization of that). Weaving back, I do see that the entire trio isn't a perfect relationship. Even so, the lack of communication is never really addressed as none of the three seem (or seemed) willing to have an honest conversation... or much of a conversation at all. Harry's definitely walking a tightrope between dark & evil, dancing on both sides. I do like the cunning displayed even as his intentions waiver about.

Now then, I really wish you'd have finished this series or even just outlined the remainder. Even if you did have notes prior, I'd doubt that, after all these years, you'd still have them or be willing to post them. I'll hold out a flicker of hope, though.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2014 7:27am for Breaking Storm

Great ride.... Hope you can continue it some time!!

GBTtown posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 11:42pm for Breaking Storm

Great story.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Tuesday 12th August 2014 4:09am for Breaking Storm

Another chapter in a fun, innovative story. Unfortunately, it may be the last, or at least the last for some time.

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2014 10:04am for Breaking Storm

Please, PLEASE finish this? Please with sugar on top?

20cent posted a comment on Tuesday 14th May 2013 1:47am for Breaking Storm

I really enjoyed your trilogy ! Angry Harry is convincing and frightening.

I'd be glad to read the last chapters if you ever write them...

Vincent.

ibskib posted a comment on Thursday 7th March 2013 4:48am for Breaking Storm

I've enjoyed this story quite a lot even though it seems like it won't be finished this Harry (spine not optional) has been pretty satisfying.

The only thing that mars my enjoyment is not knowing what exactly is up with Blaise and Zeb, and not seeing Harry hunt down his wand at last. The plot so far has been much more fun than just preventing Voldemort's return would have been.

Andrius posted a comment on Friday 14th September 2012 1:15am for Breaking Storm

I'm really curious how this story would have concluded. Everything points to Harry revealing his identity before one year is up. However, then it will be easy to make the connection to the wizard who has been terrorizing pure bloods, and he would be hunted by even more people than now.

mantimeforgot posted a comment on Wednesday 29th August 2012 6:00am for Breaking Storm

I am disappointed to see that this fic is unlikely to be continued, but pleased that my prediction that in order to create further dramatic and relationship tension Blaise would eventually "betray" or "leave" Harry in some way (which presumably would lead to Hermione and Blaise competing again to re-establish themselves in Harry's good graces). All in all the stories have proven most entertaining and has done a good job of providing a powered up Harry Potter without making him an unstoppable superman.

I hope that at some point the fic will be finalized, but understand that young children can sap the inspiration to write from the best of us.

parth posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2012 10:57am for Breaking Storm

hey draco,

i know that it has been a long long time for you to update the story but i have been following this for the last two years and i reallly reallly want to see this one updated..

please please update soon..

Dagico posted a comment on Monday 30th January 2012 4:49am for Breaking Storm

I've been following your little series since around 2005, when I was in middle school, and I've really enjoyed it. I'm in university now, and for some reason I ended up thinking about it and rereading much of it this weekend; it made me fondly remember being younger. I dunno if you have any intention of continuing with it (it's been a while), but for whatever it's worth, I just thought I'd let you know that there's at least one person who would really appreciate it.

Daniel1234 posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2012 2:07pm for Breaking Storm

Nice chapter. Now i am just waiting for Croker to croke. I really am. The miscarrige made me very angry and i donĀ“t even have kids.

_MarS_ posted a comment on Sunday 15th January 2012 4:39pm for Breaking Storm

Hello Draco,
I would like to thank you for sharing your great stories with me and all the others.
Unfortunately it seems you don't have time to write any more and I sincerely hope that is because you are enjoying time with your growing family and not as an consequence of some unfortunate event.

I wish you best of luck and thanks again
MarS

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2011 5:30am for Breaking Storm

Overall, this is a well written story, but the plot may be a bit too dark. The fact that in the end even Blaise appears to have betrayed him, although with obvious reason, is kinda disappointing. Long term, this is a very difficult series to wrap up, unless you simply finished with the Voldemort arc. The problem with the story is, while Harry's plan may work, it is a very dark and lonely road to get to the end. Also, after you pay the bill to destroy and drive off evil, the hard part truly begins. How do you convince people to build a better world, and not just slip back into complacency? Overall, I think Harry would have had a better shot, or perhaps as good of one if after he finished with the Horcruxes, he Blaise, and Hermione went to teach at Hogwarts. If Harry could be named the Head of Slytherin, with the others also in important positions you might have eventually, over the course of say forty or so years, been able to effect change without as much bloodshed. Such an effort would probably even produce longer lasting results. There would still be the odd battles of course, but the price of freedom has always been constant vigilance.

Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 1:59am for Breaking Storm

Hope your Muse will one day allow you to finish this excellent trilogy. Cheers.
Z

Jezza88 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 9:32am for Breaking Storm

Great story!!

However, I'm just curious, but when will you update the story again? It's been an entire year!! I really want to know what happens next.

Other then that, you have written a great story with great characters and it would be great to see the end of the trilogy.