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Lerris Smith posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2011 2:09am for Home, sweet home

This continues to be a good story although I'm a bit curious why it takes Harry to open the door. Sure that is the way it was intended to be opened, but why not just use spells or even mechanical means to force the entrance?

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 12:07pm for Home, sweet home

Very good chapter.

gunny

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Sunday 1st June 2008 7:57am for Home, sweet home

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vomitoria

It's a theater/arena entrance, not a place to barf. Ron might be this misinformed, but I'd think anyone shagging Granger would know better. :)

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 3:53am for Home, sweet home

I always enjoy it when Harry develops a relationship with a basilisk, whether it be Salazar's or a replacement. Serpents are so often characterized with the sort of dry humor I appreciate, and the Vatican's denizen is no different.

I am of course eaten with curiosity as to what happened to Hermione at the Ministry's hands that has everyone worryed about informing Harry. The first thing that comes to mind is some sort of prejudice due to her Muggleborn status, but one also wonders if her relationship with Harry was a factor as well. After all, if he was no longer available as her protector, some bigot might use that as an opportunity to molest her in more ways than one, perhaps by threatening her parents. Apparently whatever it was was serious enough that those who know him are concerned with triggering an appearance of Thermonuclear Harry in Terminator mode. Not that some of the Ministry hasn't earned such an appearance, but it would likely interfere with Harry's long-term plans. Still, it would be fun to watch....hope the next chapter comes a long a bit faster than the last one. Until then I'll be eagerly awaiting its appearance. Oh, and while I know I've mentioned it before, in the end I'd really like to see Hermione rejoin Harry and Blaise, hopefully in a manner that fully redeems her in Blaise's eyes as well as Harry's so that can truly be happy together. Hokey, I know, but then I'm an incurable romantic...

David Najarian posted a comment on Wednesday 21st May 2008 5:05pm for Home, sweet home

Just fiinished reading the whole story to this point, and all in one sitting. (Whew!!) Excellent story and its getting better chapter by chapter.

Cant wait for the rest!!

brad posted a comment on Monday 12th May 2008 11:43pm for Home, sweet home

Having just finished re-reading Apprentice and Journeyman I don't know why I was slightly surprised when Harry announced his plan to "destroy the current political structure of this country" in this latest chapter; he's been ranting about the corruption of the Ministry since the very beginning of your saga. It will be very interesting to see what he ends up doing.

I'm still worried about Harry and Hermione. A few chapters back in Journeyman we had this:

It would appear that she still loved me for my mind, if not my actions.

That, in and of itself, answered the questions I still had over our relationship.



It seemed to me then that Harry might have decided that he was done with Hermione; that he wanted to be appreciated for *all* that he is, mind plus 'actions', rather than just 'turning on' Hermione with the former. This made me unhappy :-(

But this latest chapter ... I'm hoping that Harry appreciates that Hermione has some backbone after all viz their talk about Draco. I guess it might all depend on the Ministry secret she's withholding from him. I've got my fingers crossed.

Other things I hope Harry manages to do: reclaim his original holly wand (it's clear in Journeyman the affinity and sentiment he has for that wand) and knock Fudge for six, of course.

If you can be bribed to write a favourable outcome for Hermione please let me know what it will take :-)

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 6th May 2008 11:01pm for Home, sweet home

A great read, you've really got me hankering to know what's coming up next - Harry's revenge on Draco & Fudge, but even more his plan to straighten out wizarding society - but above all that I'm (still) worried about him and Hermione. You couldn't have put us out of our misery in this chapter? :-(

I'm pleased that they're at least back to being friends (glad to hear that Harry can't fathom the possibility of that ever ceasing) and I note that Hermione has obviously suffered (at least as much as Blaise!) from Harry's incarceration, but otherwise I'm concerned, too, that she's become too 'submissive' ... and lost that 'steel-edged' spark which Harry found so attractive.

(Damn good paragraph, Harry's musing about Hermione, "whatever happened to this woman?")

I'm glad she still stuck to her guns about Draco, not wanting Harry to be an out-and-out murderer ... and hopefully she passed Harry's 'submission' test too. But I'm concerned about this Ministry business that she's apparently hiding from Harry, presumably so he won't go charging off to exact revenge for whatever they did to her. But that slots her somewhat into the 'damsel requiring the hero to avenge her' slot which is exactly where she *doesn't* need to be if she's to show that she hasn't changed too much from the Hermione Granger of old. Oh dear.

My H/Hr fears to one side, it was touching to read of the Harry's friends' reactions to both his absence and then his return. I look forward to Harry's plan unfolding in the coming chapters. I hope Hermione can shield her mind from Dumbledore's legilimency in the meantime, so he doesn't learn that Harry's still alive. :-)

Thank you for the story, great chapter, eagerly waiting for the next one!

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Saturday 3rd May 2008 6:17pm for Home, sweet home

Great chapter. it's a shame the time turner is buried in poop somewhere it seemed to be fairly useful. Wonder what happened to hermione I assume we'll find out soon enough.

Rob

motherjenjen posted a comment on Saturday 3rd May 2008 6:08pm for Home, sweet home

hi i really love your style oif writing
please continue soon
heheheh please feed malfoy to the basilisk
what is the basilisk's name??????
thanks jen

Banner posted a comment on Friday 2nd May 2008 1:55pm for Home, sweet home

I can't wait for Harry's revenge!
This chapter was very well done - you did an excellent job of keeping everyone both IC and reacting to long-term stress and grief. I loved the interaction with the basilisk. Should Harry name it?

grovepjp posted a comment on Friday 2nd May 2008 11:33am for Home, sweet home

Well that was nice enough. Now more of them would never go amiss.

Keep it up, it is some of the best works i have seen around and is thoroughly enjoyable.
regards,
f

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Thursday 1st May 2008 6:53pm for Home, sweet home

This is just quite wonderful. A plan to revolutionize the wizarding world? Couldn't happen to a better set of folk.

Looking forward to the next installment.

sillyfish posted a comment on Thursday 1st May 2008 5:12am for Home, sweet home

Great story. Please keep going.

Bferbear posted a comment on Thursday 1st May 2008 12:00am for Home, sweet home

Excellent as always, well worth the wait.

witowsmp posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 10:02pm for Home, sweet home

I've really enjoyed this story, and look forward to the next chapter.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 9:13pm for Home, sweet home

Very good chapter, can't wait to read more.

gunny

Gena posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 8:10pm for Home, sweet home

Please update soon this is really good i like it alot

Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 4:14pm for Home, sweet home

grreat chapter - love harry's plan for Draco


the conversation with the basilisk was top notch - - cool and collectedly thanking harry for the meal

thanks so much
warm regards

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 12:14pm for Home, sweet home

Great chapter! Very funny, and it was good to see the various reactions from Harry's friends. Glad to see the basilisk took care of Kellerman without any trouble. Not sure what else to say specifically, but I definitely felt that this was one of the best chapters in a very good story. Thanks for writing!
Jay

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 9:54am for Home, sweet home

First off, I liked this chapter as whole. Ron was a hoot, and the basilisk was interesting. However, I am disappointed in two this time around. The first is Harry declaring that he intends to manipulate Draco into a confrontation, just so he can kill him in "self-defense." To me, that is still premeditated murder. ALL of his friends should take issue with that. Of course, it can be argued that Draco needs no reason to toss an AK or two in Harry's direction. But still, the manipulation factor grates on me too much. It seems like Harry is rapidly devolving into a twisted hybrid of Dumbledore & Voldemort. The second is that you are apparently doing everything to ruin Harry & Hermione's romantic relationship. IMO, Hermione was right to be affronted by Harry's killing of Snape, although she MAY have overreacted. Harry needs Hermione to kick his ass on these types of things, as to me, Blaise is too passively accepting of Harry's darker side. Then there too is the whole "you can't keep secrets, but it is ok for me to" attitude. Harry is being unrealistic and uncompromising. He needs to bend more, or he will break when it comes to interpersonal relationships.