Midnight Duel, Midday Love
By Draco664
Good chapter. You need to use some sort of scene break.
gunny
How tragic that "love" could cause so much pain.
Ginny really loves Harry but because she wanted him so much she went over the line. Harry loves Cho but Ginny was his friend. I hope the Harry I have learned to admire can find it in his heart to
forgive her at some point. I also hope Ron can learn to forgive his little sister.
At least Ron is learning to think a little before acting. I hope Hermione can figure out a way for Harry to stay in school. If anyone can it is her. Thanks for writing. pms
I am with Ron wanting to be sick.
Somehow, Hermione will have to devise a way to make things better. Harry has the capacity to forgive her. If you succeed you will have written a marvelous redemption story.
Amazing.
I see your DoubleDumb is still as afraid of the truth as JKR's. What a sad way to live. Of course...either the truth comes out or none of it comes out. How many witnesses are there?
I love the fact that DoubleDumb once again throws Harry under the bus. The thing is, I think that you have canon!DoubleDumb almost perfect. He just isn't quite as evil as in canon...well, maybe he is. You still need to kill Draco, Snape, DoubleDumb, Peter, and Moldie. The world will be a better place without any of them in it.