By Draco664
Reviews
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 8:28pm
Total whoa! Very well written. I totally fell for the whole evil vampire is the one doing all the killing... though I figured it out a little bit before it became obvious... though not much. The styles of killing were far different. So how in the world do you either heal or kill a deranged uberpowerful wizard who wants to finger paint with your blood? A second chapter with the answer would be great!
Must admit, knowing that it was Harry who killed Grawp is rather sad.
Pointer posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 5:53pm
lmao
Pointer
Fishburne posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 2:54pm
Holy Carp!
Yes Carp!
Dang, thats a wicked little Bunny.
Looks like voldie Moldie Shorts and Harry Pants merged into something wicked this way comes.
OOOH Yes, I like it!
Illusia posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 2:51pm
I await more to this. There's so many theories now that could make sense of this plot. But however it goes, I haven't heard this one before :)
Jinshun Wang posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 11:28am
BWAHAHAHAHA! Suitably disturbing, absolutely thrilling! An excellent start to a promising tale!
Tobang posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 9:59am
I liked it even if it was a little depressing...
mike bates posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 9:48am
if this is a one-shot story then i like it......if it's a story with multiple chapters then i like it even more because of what i just read. glad to read something like this.
liquidfyre posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 7:02am
One shot or not you better find yer attention again thats Damn good and freaky scary too id be drooling over updates if you kept it going
loralee posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 6:08am
Wow totally creepy. Gave my shivers. Good job I liked it. :)
Prince Charon posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 3:58am
Whoa, dark.
Crazy posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 8:43pm
That was weird, but very good. I picked up a little bit through Dumbledore's speech that either HP or Voldy had survived, but wasn't able to identify until near the end.
reimanr06 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 8:13pm
Why does Harry seem to resemble Gollum?
And as a side note, according to a friend in Immigration/Border Patrol, "tonks" is a racial slur regarding Mexicans, as that is the sound that is made when you hit them over the head with a flashlight.
es posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 6:53pm
thats a plot twist to rule the world... fun
Brendan posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 6:39pm
Although this is only a drabble, I serioulsy suggest doing a follow chapter. This is well written, flowed like a river and was much better than the drivel you find on ff.net. Well done.
MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 6:03pm
Amusing. I liked the twist that Nos wasn't the horror in the forest. Shouldn't the map have said something like Harry Riddle?
brad posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:52pm
Written well, particularly the fight between Nosferatu and the Boy Who Is Damned. I liked how Harry was able to counter every move by Nosferatu.
It's a pity, though, from what you've written here, that Harry WASN'T able to defeat Voldemort. Since one of the two personalities was hissing and wants to rule the world, I'm assuming that Voldemort fled his own body and is currently inhabiting Harry's, rather than Harry just going insane. Sad that everyone thinks Harry won, where in reality he did not succeed after all.
I'm going to assume that, now that the good guys know about Harry's predicament they'll work out a way to save him, he'll marry Hermione and they'll live happily ever after, okay?
NiereG posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:44pm
Great story! Creepy, but great. I figured out who/what the wizard critter was, but until it killed the vamp I didn't figure out that it was the killer. Great twist on a very original plot.
I know you said you lost interest, but please consider writing more of the story.
Thanks for a great read,
NiereG
sandstar08 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:26pm
damn, i wish i hadn't read that at night...
Merle Corey posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 4:05pm
Nice twist with the carnage assumed to be caused by the recently escaped nosferatu. It would be nice to find out what happened to Dumbledore, how Harry became amorphous, who he is arguing with, and why Tonks is there at Hogwarts.
IceBlades posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2006 10:29am