D. Neikirk posted a comment on Sunday 19th July 2015 11:03am for Prologue

A new "author" has appeared on Fanfiction.net that has copied this chapter verbatim. You might want to protest. Here are the links:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4880055/hazel6

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11388060/1/Apprentice-Potter

this so-called author has been "borrowing" a lot of fiction from others.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Friday 11th May 2012 12:17am for Prologue

Good beginning!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 5:40am for Prologue

Thats a great start. I like the use of Harry's pov. Will you keep it like that all the way through?

The jokes are good too, particularly Moody's eye needing a passport.

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2008 3:43am for Prologue

Standard opening, well done except for Harry's philosophical errors.

This would be cliché except it is supposedly an early, and good, example of the genre.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 11:34pm for Prologue

Ok. Angry Harry. I can really understand that! Really surprising that Vernon would stop Dudley though. Very well done. Thanks for writing. pms

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2005 7:19am for Prologue

Good start.

gunny

caitlin posted a comment on Friday 29th July 2005 5:27pm for Prologue

hey this is really good. i finally found the password to my old account on fanfiction, and i saw that one of my favorite stories of all time had disappeared, snape's worst nightmare. i love that one. anyways, i am just getting around to reading this one, and i love it. great job!