Betrayal of the Best Kind
Flee
By Draco664
Reviews
Jenifer Winterbine posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd December 2009 10:25am for Flee
Here:
'...only took a few hours to gather enough evidence to organise a raid, and only two days to organise that raid. In a massive yet discrete operation, hundreds of Ministry officials deployed themselves to Buckingham Palace, and launched an assault on the headquarters of the Dark Lord.'
Where you have 'discrete' I think the correct word is 'discreet', - they do not mean the same thing.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 17th November 2006 4:02pm for Flee
Good one.
gunny
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 9:11pm for Flee
Ok. So Harry plans to save the world and kill Voldemort and die in the process. Typical Gryfindor! We need to save the savior! How do you plan on doing that? I really want to know. Thanks for writing. pms
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:19pm for Flee
Ugh. That 'never see me again' stuff fills me with foreboding.
Gutwrenchingly good writing.
twistyguru posted a comment on Friday 17th September 2010 6:36pm for Flee