Betrayal of the Best Kind
Grab
By Draco664
Reviews
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 7:20pm for Grab
Ok. A good chapter except for Cho's arrival. I don't understand why Harry let her be tortured. I guess it was taken out of his hands. I hope it gets explained. At least she had Sirius portkey. Thanks for writing. pms
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 1:07pm for Grab
I want to be sick again.
I see no way this will work out, unless somehow Harry made her look this way magically without hurting her.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 17th November 2006 2:54pm for Grab