Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 8:21am for 'Crux Finale

Great chapter. You kept the action moving along nicely, and I like how you sprinkle in a bit of humor too. I also like that Draco has become at least a little bit more of a threat compared to the books. Wouldn't want it to be too easy for Harry, now would we? Thanks for writing!

Disobedience posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 8:08am for 'Crux Finale

A very nice chapter for action and mayhem. I look forward to seeing Harry take on our favorite, resurrected ferret in the near future. Especially enjoyed the arrogant Kellerman's inadvertant use of a portkey to visit Harry's old, basilisk 'friend'. As per usual, wizards are stupider than should be possible. (Evil Wizard School Lesson #54: Never touch another wizard's portkey, especially while interrogating said wizard. FAILED)

Renzo7 posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 7:42am for 'Crux Finale

Excellent work, as always... Poor Harry just can't catch a break of good luck, right? always has to get caught or injured... lol... Great work with Malfoy, I really enjoyed the tantrums. Keep up the good work and please have Harry get some much needed, loving care from Blaise.

CRose posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 7:40am for 'Crux Finale

Excellent, I've been looking forward to this chapter. Malfoy has Harry captured, at his mercy, and can do anything. And he reverts to taunting and humiliation. Typical. To bad he seems to have gotten away so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 7:33am for 'Crux Finale

Nice. VERY nice. I love this story and was excited to see it updated. I really like the effort that you make to show the learning that Harry is doing (should have checked the inconsistencies in the will). The fight scenes are excellent (will we find out if Harry owns a Kellerman statue? Maybe he could get a life debt off him?) and the small observations (problems with fine motor skills with the right hand) really give the story color. One request? I would like to see the avenging angel of death (Zab) teaming up with Harry to avenge the death of his friend - that would be TOTALLY WICKED! Anyway, more Zab?

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 7:07am for 'Crux Finale

Nice part here, and glad to see Dobby again, and Draco is a sneaky little guy at times, and also seems to have the common sense of a toad in a boiling pot. Looking forward to what'll happen next time.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 6:34am for 'Crux Finale

Well, that was an unexpected turn of events, I wonder if Draco was under imperius when he faked his death? That plan showed far more fore thought and intelligence than he'd ever displayed before, and certainly more than he displayed this chapter. While it should be interesting to see Harry hit the stronghold again, I'm wondering if it's really such a smoking hot idea. Regardless, great chapter, thank you.

Memory King posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 5:43am for 'Crux Finale

Excellent chapter. Your stories are one of the best in the Potter fandom. Good luck with the next chapter!

Keldore posted a comment on Monday 17th September 2007 5:41am for 'Crux Finale

I really hope he doesn't get his stuff back except for his wand. Magical items are cool and all, but at this point he should really be beyond needing crutches. The Deathly Hallows were really the very worst part of the last book for that reason. Hardwork, intelligence, and wand should be all a wizard really needs.