Alex00 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th October 2009 1:05am for Breaking Storm

Awesome stuff keep it up.

Hawklan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th October 2009 1:39pm for Breaking Storm

Thanks for the new chapter and I'm looking forward to see what Blaze did or what happend to her.
That the church tried something didn't surprise me.

Richard6154 posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2009 5:48pm for Breaking Storm

Very enjoyable, looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing

Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2009 9:37am for Breaking Storm

Friggin Awesome!!!!!!!!!! Great Job! What fun! Can't wait for the next update!

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 11:34am for Breaking Storm

Outstanding chapter!!!! I love how Harry mocks the church wizards!!!! Will we be seeing more of Harry's plans???? Where did Blaise go???? Did she betray Harry???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 11:17pm for Breaking Storm

Wow! Quite a busy chapter. Zab would have been incensed by Harry's capture. I can see Blaise letting her grandfather go. She wanted to when Harry told her he had him. I hope she and Harry can work things out. We will see what her side of things are. In the meantime Harry has contacted Tonks and that went well. I understand how Ron could have destroyed the docks accidentally. It is a Ron thing. I think Harry having Dobby remove any indication that Harry was there was excellent planning. I'm sure the 3 elves can hide from the Durseley's. I would love to be a fly on the wall if Petunia decided to get something from the attic and found 3 elves living there! That would be great! I'm glad Harry plans saved the Basilisk. He is not guilty of anything other than being alive and wanting to live his life as he wishes. I'm glad he appreciates what Harry had done for him. That was real good. I look forward to more of this story. It sounds like we are moving toward an conclusion. Thanks for writing. I am really enjoying this story. pms.

Taillon posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 9:24pm for Breaking Storm

Great read as always, looking forward to the next update!

Taegeous posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 4:59pm for Breaking Storm

Blaise has been an active participant since Harry began his plan, so I doubt that she betrayed him. More likely, Zab had some contingency plan, and he was somehow freed. He probably took the pictures and Blaise's clothes, intent on separating their relationship when he returned with Ministry Aurors. I hope Harry gives him hell.

vheritas posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 8:57am for Breaking Storm

A chapter with a bit of everything - politics, deception, humour, conflict, betrayal, plotting - all in all a satisfying read. Keep up the fine job.

corwalch posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 8:29am for Breaking Storm

More soon, please. I haven't had such a good laugh in ages. Though I do have to wonder what happened with Blaise.

Kitiem posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 7:01am for Breaking Storm

I hope there is another explanation for Blaise disappearing. It would be kinda sad otherwise.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 6:53am for Breaking Storm

Great chapter. Love the chaos that seems to engulf Harry's plans. I hope Blaise is alright. I guess that she has been kidnapped by her grandfather or convinced by him to be in a place where she can't help Harry.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks for the update.

Tom A.

dimriver posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 11:50pm for Breaking Storm

Well they were all armed with the wrong weapon, they should have used a sword and bird. Very nice story.

Anansii posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 10:37pm for Breaking Storm

You win some, you lose some... I'm enjoying this immensely. Do you write your own (non fanfic) adventure novels as well? If not, you should consider it.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 9:32pm for Breaking Storm

I think Blaise just wanted to talk to her Grandfather and he did something to her. Great chapter.

Thanks for writing
MPF

huskerfan posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 8:59pm for Breaking Storm

Good chapter, I cant wait to read more. I hope that Blaise didn't betray Harry, that would seem a little much for the story.

scribbler posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 8:07pm for Breaking Storm

WOW. Great chapter and incredible, complex detail. This one was definitely worth the wait!!

Can't wait to see what you do next!

Regards,

Edmond

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 7:55pm for Breaking Storm

Well crud. I guess I understand Blaise's point, but I'd hopped she'd have kept faith with Harry better than this. An outstanding chapter, thank you.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 7:52pm for Breaking Storm

great chapter - love the way you began with the philosophy, and then enacted everything discussed

thanks much for sharing

ucdneo posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 5:36pm for Breaking Storm

Yay for the update!!! Of course, now I want more. It's such a vicious cycle. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!