Snape's Worst Nightmare
Them v Us
By Draco664
Reviews
Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Saturday 28th February 2009 4:29am for Them v Us
-back after reading the rest.
Most amusing... my cheeks are sore from laughing.
Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Saturday 28th February 2009 4:13am for Them v Us
may or may not have been said but,
in 1980, Remus was 20 (when harry was born)
in 1999, Remus was 39 (when the Nightmare Dozen were concieved)
in 2011, Remus would be 51 - early fifties, not late forties as is stated when he joins Harry before the match. Just thought I'd say so.
jokerswyld posted a comment on Thursday 8th January 2009 3:54pm for Them v Us
Awesome! Loved reading it! Too bad this is the end of it though. I'd love to hear more about the Nightmare Dozen.
Milarqui posted a comment on Saturday 3rd January 2009 1:47am for Them v Us
The Slytherin team were distracted enough that James managed to fly straight through the upper goal hoop without interference, cheekily carrying the Quaffle through for a goal.
I'm not quite sure about this, but I think that there is a rule in Quidditch stating that the ball must be thrown for a goal to be legal, and that carrying it results in a penalization against the attacking team.
princess ducky posted a comment on Tuesday 16th December 2008 12:09pm for Them v Us
Brilliantly funny story.
Keep Writing
Princess Ducky
kate19 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2008 7:23pm for Them v Us
very very well done!! i am quite speechless actually!!! never seen anything like this. good use of characters too. loved that harry orchestrated that april fool's prank! i'll be looking at the other stories in your profile and see if there isn't some other story of yours i haven't read yet. bye
lazypr posted a comment on Tuesday 9th September 2008 11:13am for Them v Us
ROTFLMAO!!!!!!
ChocoholicWriter posted a comment on Tuesday 29th July 2008 10:48pm for Them v Us
Hilarious! Pity Snape quit, though, I would have loved to see fics detailing their entire Hogwarts career!
Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 9:22pm for Them v Us
Somehow I had not ever seen this story on the site, as many times as I have read Journeyman and Apprentice Potter, what a treat this was - loved the 1st quidditch game, then you wiped that from memory with the 2nd - just an overall topnotch read, one I will recommend very widely.
thanks and warmest regards
Milarqui posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2008 1:18am for Them v Us
OK, I have to say that your story was most enjoyable and funny, and I really hope that you write more Harry/Ginny stories like this one. However, I have found a bit of a problem with one of the characters: Damien Malfoy.
As far as we know, Damien could be either Lucius Malfoy's son (considering the comments the Head Girl makes about Harry and Damien's father hating each, it's obvious she isn't talking about Lucius, because the enmity everybody could see was Harry and Draco's) or Draco Malfoy's.
However, on this last account, there are a series of problems I feel I should address:
- Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy were both born in the year 1980, and entered Hogwarts in 1991. This accounts correctly when it is mentioned (somewhere in the story, I don't remember where exactly) that Harry is 31 by the year 2011.
- Damien is said to be already a fifth-year prefect, so he must be fifteen years old. Thus, he was born between September 1995 and August 1996, as one enters Hogwarts in the first 1st September he or she is eleven.
- However, this would mean that Damien was born while Malfoy was still at school!
Would you explain this small mistake?
Apart from that, a very wonderful story.
Mris posted a comment on Sunday 22nd June 2008 4:06pm for Them v Us
Wonderful!! I throughly enjoyed this. You have some wonderful ideas for magically done pranks that I could've easliy seen woven through Rowling's books. Excellent job in writing.
Being purely selfish I would love to see the antics of their second year and perhaps the years their siblings come to Hogwarts...but like I said very selfish of me. But if you ever do write a sequel to this or just a few drabbles here and there, please let me know!
FireStorm posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 3:41pm for Them v Us
This story was pure evil and I loved every single word of it! Although I was hoping that Snape would wind up in St. Mungo's mental ward :-D
Elton Denson posted a comment on Wednesday 4th June 2008 6:24am for Them v Us
I loved these stories.
I hope you do more in this vein... Wonderful, easy enjoyable reading. Fits well into work breaks.
Thanks for the ride...
Elton
DarkestSecret posted a comment on Thursday 15th May 2008 4:29pm for Them v Us
I was crying and upset when I started this fic. By the time I finished, the only tears I was crying were ones of laughter! Thanks so much for the wonderful fic and the perfect pick-me-up! =)
Maximum posted a comment on Thursday 8th May 2008 11:18pm for Them v Us
Brilliant!
Milarqui posted a comment on Monday 5th May 2008 8:49am for Them v Us
Hell, I really LOVED this!!! I would love to see more stories of this kind! Why don't you write more stories with the canon couples? I'm sure many people would like to read them!
Roya jaferi posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 2:04pm for Them v Us
yes i enjoy this story very much and it was hilarious.
Drake Vega posted a comment on Thursday 24th April 2008 2:36pm for Them v Us
Oh, MY, GOD!!
THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!
Oh, the day I started on the website trail that led me to this story will be saluted/toasted again and again and again!!
To the author: would you object to a picture of the Nightmare Dozen being done? I acknowledge it's against canon with the loses to the Weasley's but you did so well with the look of the various kids. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
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mimirr@hotmail.com
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 6th March 2008 11:58pm for Them v Us
Brilliant!!!!!!
BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Monday 23rd March 2009 3:14pm for Them v Us