Betrayal of the Best Kind

Here:
'...only took a few hours to gather enough evidence to organise a raid, and only two days to organise that raid. In a massive yet discrete operation, hundreds of Ministry officials deployed themselves to Buckingham Palace, and launched an assault on the headquarters of the Dark Lord.'
Where you have 'discrete' I think the correct word is 'discreet', - they do not mean the same thing.

Good one.

gunny

Ok. So Harry plans to save the world and kill Voldemort and die in the process. Typical Gryfindor! We need to save the savior! How do you plan on doing that? I really want to know. Thanks for writing. pms

Ugh. That 'never see me again' stuff fills me with foreboding.

Gutwrenchingly good writing.