By Draco664
Reviews
Omeganian posted a comment on Saturday 3rd June 2006 12:19am
Why didn't you change the fluoric acid mistake? It hardly reacts with water, there would have been little if any heat.
Hannah3 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 8:41pm
I'm giggling so hard right now, I can barely type...espcially this last scene.
Alternator posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 2:26am
A good story, but with a few glaring flaws--mainly how Harry is treated, and how quickly people believe the worst of him. I did like the portrayal of Sirius' and Harry's relationship, though; ultimate trust is rare and valuable, and the two of them do seem to share it in canon. Very well used and developed there.
The flaws keep this from being among the top tier, but it's still worth reading.
Pavonis posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 8:55am
Great story. I just read the entire thing since finding the link on darklordpotter.net. You won the best azkaban story. I have to say I think it was well deserved.
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 11:41pm
A very nice ending. They still have a threat of Voldemort over them but that should be over soon. Thank you for writing a great story. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 11:10pm
Finally Harry is getting back to Hogwarts but now there is a problem with Sirius? Ok, next chapter. Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 10:51pm
This is good. Harry is alive. No one really knows except the people present. He is growing fast and his friends now know. This is good. Also Voldemort is in a bad way with only 2 followers at the moment. I like it. Please continue! pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 10:15pm
Ok! A Great Solution! What a terrific imagination although I should have know when his animagus form ia a Phoenix. A wonderful chapter. Thank you for writing it. Now his still needs to take down the Dark Lord! So let's see the rest of the story!
pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 9:59pm
I can't believe that Voldemort got away. I know he is in bad shape -- but he got away!?!
Ok Next Chapter! pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 9:40pm
All right! That is much better. Thanks for the great laugh on Dumbledore. Sirius did a great job. I love Sirius giving the tears to Cho! Dirty old man! I am so glad Cho found Harry. I'm just sorry Harry didn't get to finish his preparations. Now the duel!!!
Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 9:11pm
Ok. So Harry plans to save the world and kill Voldemort and die in the process. Typical Gryfindor! We need to save the savior! How do you plan on doing that? I really want to know. Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 8:41pm
Ok. Things are progressing. But will Harry escape before his is given the dark mark? I know. read on. Thanks, pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 8:09pm
Ok. Cho is safe and Harry will be able to heal her. He got to talk to Sirius and Dumbledore. Now he knows where he is. All he needs to do now is get the information he needs and get out in one piece. No problem, right? Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 7:46pm
That was brutal but I can see how Harry was forced to do that. Of course Lucius would try to go one step farther. Thank God the portkey activated then. Of course Lucius is in trouble with the Dark Lord now! That is good at least. Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 7:20pm
Ok. A good chapter except for Cho's arrival. I don't understand why Harry let her be tortured. I guess it was taken out of his hands. I hope it gets explained. At least she had Sirius portkey. Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 6:58pm
Very interesting. I'm glad Sirius found Harry and was able to get a message. I hope this goes well. I'm glad Ginny is there. I hope noone gets hurt. thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 6:36pm
Know thy enemy? Is Harry learning things he will need? Is he curious or is he willing to really join the Dark Lord? Next! Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 6:13pm
Of course. Harry has gone with Voldemort but I don't think he will stay. He is too smart to think he is safe with Voldemort. Thanks for writing -- on to the next chapter! pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 5:59pm
Ok. Harry can't join the Dark Lord. We know that. However he can't trust the teachers right now either. So this looks like a good time for him to fly to Fawkes. I'm glad Cho and Sirius are talking and getting things straightened out. Now let's see where you go from this. Thanks for writing. pms
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 7:33am