Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 5:46pm

Ok. Harry escaped, again. Only to be caught but in the process Uncle Vernon is arrested. Dumbledore, etc. show up to "rescue" Harry and he escapes again only to now have Death Eaters show up! This is really good and fast paced. Thanks for writing it. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 5:29pm

Oh this is good. Sirius has Cho and Harry has the police investigating child abuse. Very good. Ok -- NEXT! Thanks for writing this. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 5:10pm

Wow! Well done! I know Harry flew down and posed at the bottom. Now Hermione is going to check and Harry won't be there will he? Very well done. Also. Sirius will know when he has time to think. Thanks for writing. This is good. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 4:59pm

Ok, now Dumbledore has a seed of doubt. Finally! Sirius is doing a good job as a defense lawyer! Now let's see if Harry gets caught. At least Phoenix are quick!

thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 4:39pm

OK. Now Harry and Sirius know how Harry was "stunned". They know how the frame was done except they haven't figured out that Cho wasn't there afterall. It was underhanded that Dumbledore got Cho to write the letter. I look forward to how you work this out. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 4:23pm

Bad scene. It looks really bad for Harry. I appreciate your writing of a very good frame job. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 3:52pm

Wow! Harry got a lot more done with that letter about Fudge than he thought he would. It is poetic justice that he ended up in Harry's cell.
Harry had quite a get together with Cho. It went a lot farther than I thought it would. Poor Ginny. It is going to be more difficult for her than she thinks. I look forward to more. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 3:24pm

I am so glad it was Sirius! What a great reunion for Harry and Sirius. I love Sirius reaction when he realized that Harry had turned into a Phoenix. I really like the way Harry approached Cho. The rose was a nice touch. Finishing up at Cedric's grave was good. Harry needed closure for that one. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 3:08pm

Very good! OK, who caught Harry at the Shreaking Shack? Moony? Dumbledore? Sirius? Snape? I really want to know! That was a nice interlude with Cho. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 2:47pm

Ok. I'm sorry Harry had such a bad experience the first time he tried to change but I'm glad he changed back so quick. I like the back story of him writing to Cho & Ron. I look forward to where this goes. Of course I know it is going to get worse before it gets better.

Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 2:00pm

Ahh! Like the Marauder's Map only directions for becoming an animagus. Cool. Ok onward with this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 1:40pm

A good chapter. I look forward to more. I hate to think of Harry is Askaban. I expect that is going to come out soon. thanks for writing. pms

jake m posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 3:05am

HMMM I THOUGHT TWOULD BE A DEPRESSING STORY BOUT HARRY BEING BETRAYED AND ALL O DAM IM WRITING IN CAPITALS ALL WELL CANT BE HELPED
P.S IM IN A SAD MOOD AT THE MOMENT WOULD HV BEEN BETTER IF IT WAS A SAD DEPRESSING STORY IF ONE IS HAPPY WOULD HAVE A WARM FUZZY FEELING AFFECT

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 3:36pm

A fine excellent story with few rivals for the finest in Harry Potter fanfiction.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 3:19pm

Fun time with McGonagoll.

And now I want to hurl again about Sirius.

Thank goodness this is a finished sic.

Fine work!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 3:08pm

I am so glad Harry is back with his friends and approaching happy again.

Excellent recovery chapter.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:58pm

Several fanfics have made Harry an animagus phoenix. I have thought about doing it myself.

But now I am not sure I can in tribute to the best idea yet >> Harry dies and then goes through a burning to come back to life.

Many times brilliant and clever.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:47pm

One of the finest fights with Voldemort while Harry was severely outnumbered and still victorious, I have ever seen.

Phenomenol. Amazing. Terrific!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:36pm

Evil cliffies once again.

Oh how glad I am that this story is finished - but the sequel.

Very fine way to have Harry be redeemed from his half life.

Excellent logic path for Dumbledore, Cho, and Sirius to feollow his machinations.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:19pm

Ugh. That 'never see me again' stuff fills me with foreboding.

Gutwrenchingly good writing.