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atlantis-rob posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 5:05am for And YOU want me to do what?

Wow! Great chapter D! That was great with the trip with Ron. The street fights setup and result were highly entertaining though I am very suprised that harry doesn't know at least a basic translation charm for reading/etc. The meeting at Popeland was excellent and the dialogue snappy. All of a sudden I think a Bailisk may be living in the basement of Grimauld...Cheers!!!!

aemon_targaryen posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 4:53am for And YOU want me to do what?

As always, I enjoy reading your work. I love this Ron you've created-he's grown up and yet remained entirely Ron. It might be my favorite of all the Rons I've read-most writers do too much to accentuate his negative qualities, or try to do an "Extreme Makeover" of his entire personality and make him "Hero 1B" to Harry's "Hero 1A", or even worse-try to replace Harry with Ron. I rather like how you've kept the romance stuff in the background-it's interesting, but not the focal point of this story. I guess Italy's corruption is prevalent even in the magical side of things. I'm very curious to see what kind of deal Harry strikes with the basilisk. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

ThadiusZho posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 4:52am for And YOU want me to do what?

I'm just imagining a conversation.

"Hello Albus. The items in the Pope's secret room are now in the Chamber. Oh, here, a portkey to the place so you can look around."
"Thank you Harry. I thought you wouldn't give me permission to see them."
"You can go ahead. By the way, I also brought the Basilisk that was in the secret room. Hope you don't mind. It's just double the size of the last one. Oh, look at the times. Gotta split."

Great chapter. Loved the interaction with Ron and Wal the Dorf...

Mayjest posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 4:01am for And YOU want me to do what?

Ahhh, you're gonna move the entire stockpile AND the basilisk to the Chamber! Genius! Sheer brilliance.

But wouldyou sort out Harry's relationships already! I know romance isn't your focus, but it's depressing to not know what's happening!

Lufio posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 3:38am for And YOU want me to do what?

Nice. I was expecting Harry to spare the basilisk, but I wasn't expecting the acquisition of both the basilisk and its hoard.