Adam posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 8:43am for Mopping up

well if master potter is as good as journeyman (which I have no doubt it will be) then I will look forward to reading of his adventures :)

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 7:54am for Mopping up

Or he arranged for there to be a bunch of death eaters at the arrival point.

Not to mention the lameness of Malfoy's escape....why can't authors just kill the pest and be done with him?

Also,

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you might want to fix that...

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Memory King posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 7:27am for Mopping up

Outstanding work! Really enjoyed the story on the whole, can't wait for the sequel. Keep writing!

ThadiusZho posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 6:06am for Mopping up

Hi. It's a great story.

Malfoy's gonna be minced meat, when Harry finishes with him.

And Snape, hehehehehehehehehehe.

Just one problem, towards the end of the Malfoy hideout part of the story, when Snape appears, there's some script appearing.

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I don't know if only I can see it, as the other reviewers dind't say anything about it.

Just so you know.

Zho

csktech posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 5:39am for Mopping up

Once more a masterfull story. Thanks once again for this unusual look at our favorite boy wizard.

Kyle

c3markh posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 5:11am for Mopping up

Love the series. Thanks for writing.

Tolias posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 4:25am for Mopping up

I could cheerfully murder you :)

Hurry up and get Master Potter
up!!