Prince Charon posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 9:59am for The Gringotts Job

ROTFLMAO!!

You're very good at this.

More soon, please.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 6:50pm for The Gringotts Job

What a great chapter. Harry gets access to vaults before he's 25. He and Ron do the impossible and break into Gringotts and scare the daylights out of the Goblins. They actually get to have possession of another horcrux without anyone except a vault door and a dragon getting hurt. (I do hope the dragon is ok.) A great chapter. Thank you for writing. pms

t_gebhardt posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 11:33am for The Gringotts Job

OK I read that chapter and hope that you sometimes soon clear that matter with Hermione. Otherwise it was up to your usual high standards.

Asad posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 3:46am for The Gringotts Job

Just jogging my memory here but wasn't there a theft at Gringotts in Harry's first year? It was even in the Daily Prophet, if I recall correctly. Are you ignoring that robbery when writing this chapter?

Or is "successful" the keyword here?

alec_potter posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 12:25am for The Gringotts Job

you take a long time to update,but v def cant crib bout the quaity...awesom chapter...the fics been going very good.just update faster this time.

N Reynolds posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 7:25pm for The Gringotts Job

There was a movie called "The italian job" With, I think, the line

"You were only supposed to blow the fucking doors off!"

You did refer to the papal job as the Italian job in the story. Was this on your mind while writing it?

I was convinced Harry was going to get out of it by telling the goblins how it was done, so they could hopefully prevent it in the future. Luckily future thieves can only steal things that were just stolen.

Alot of fun. I love this story and the prequel to it.

pstibbons posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 11:45pm for The Gringotts Job

It is seldom that a fanfic author makes intelligent, original, use of a time turner. Thank you for this original chapter.

hholidays posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 3:41pm for The Gringotts Job

Excellent. I always get confused with time turners... but aside from the fact that they didn't have to wait an extra five hours, everything was pretty clear.

Great chappie.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 10:58am for The Gringotts Job

Great chapter. Wonderful bank robery; Only with a time turner could someone go to the bank to find out what had been stolen from him, and end up being the theif. Ron was an excellent accomplice.

Good job. I'm looking forward to more.

Tom A.

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 5:45am for The Gringotts Job

"Pinky, are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

Bwa-hahahahahaha!

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 5:41am for The Gringotts Job

A very interesting chapter. One retrieved Horcrux, one Gringotts robbery and lots of fun and excitement for one and all. Keep up the good work.

kelvin posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 9:59pm for The Gringotts Job

My head hurts from reading time turner experience! I wont read that bit again except i know that harry and ron stolen whatever it was!

interesting chapter, had no idea that they stole the object themselves.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 8:23pm for The Gringotts Job

*laughs* Now that was quite an installment. Here's hoping that's the right locker; it'd be a shame to have done all that for nothing.

Jayy posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 6:33pm for The Gringotts Job

Time Travel! I love this entire chapter, especially stealing from Harry's own vault.

AK posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 6:26pm for The Gringotts Job

hahahahaha, that's just great ;). Hum but then again he robbed himself... how strange eh?

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 4:26pm for The Gringotts Job

Lots of interesting wizarding society info, there with the ancient goblin.

> Fast, blindingly fast, and bowel loosening.
> The trip back to the surface easily broke the existing record, whatever it was.
THAT kind of quiet joke is one of the kinds I like best. Kudos, Draco.

Hmm. I presume the jug was toasted by the dragon. Otherwise, it'll do its best to freeze the entire world, starting in the Gringotts catacombs.

Wait a minute, wait a minute. Harry was called to Gringotts "before" he was the cause of being called to Gringotts! How . . . But . . . *sigh* I hate time paradoxes. I feel a headache coming on. ;)

aemon_targaryen posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 4:13pm for The Gringotts Job

I always enjoy your stories, and I really like fanfic cliches turned on their heads, such as Griphook just being a flunky in this chapter. I liked the re-integration of Ron into the storyline, and I think you've matured him appropriately-i.e., not too much. So many writers write Ron into something he's not, and I like your still-Quidditch-obsessed version as a natural extension of his character. I've always thought that introducing the Time-Turner was one of the worst thing JKR could have done, since it leaves the question-"well, why don't you use the Time-Turner to fix things?" I like that you kept your use of it understated though.

Thinking back a little bit, I kind of get the feeling that Snape isn't dead, and Dumbledore is still playing games, and that Hermione will end up looking pretty stupid after it all comes out. Even if he is dead though, I think she's still making a mistake.

Glad to see this story is still being worked on, and as always I look forward to reading more.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 3:27pm for The Gringotts Job

Just barely easy enough to follow that I did, and plenty convoluted enough that I had to stop and think about it once or twice. Good show! I don't think I've ever seen a horcrux attainment pulled off quite this well before. Lovely.

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 3:02pm for The Gringotts Job

Fricken Brilliant! That's was one of the most awesome chapters of any fanfiction I've ever read. Keep up the great work!

Mordecai posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 1:51pm for The Gringotts Job

Why Griphook? Why, why why why why? There was no need for it, and all it does is give into one of the biggest cliches there, Harry meetign Griphook at Gringotts and recognising him.

Apart from that, not a bad chapter, though a tad boring.

Draco664 replied:

What's the biggest Griphook cliche in fanfiction? Griphook being made Harry's account manager.

Ever seen a fanfic where Griphook gets treated with the same contempt that the goblins treat humans?