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fluffyfan posted a comment on Sunday 28th July 2013 4:10pm for Epilogue

:D unbelievable writing skills you possess! :D i find it odd that you like to implement words that are not commonly seen, making me go to the hassel of searching up ever word to understand the story better! this is the first completed harry/cho fic that had a happy ending and was full of creativeness, you deserve an award! :D

Vicki219 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th April 2011 12:54am for Epilogue

Brilliant story!!

Palindrome102 posted a comment on Friday 3rd December 2010 1:21am for Epilogue

Again love the story, very good sequal and i heart the epilogue.

thaumologist posted a comment on Sunday 24th October 2010 7:15pm for Epilogue

Well that was awesome (and the first one too). I have to say, I felt Harry forgave them all (in the first) a bit quickly, but I can see why.

I love how you managed to consistently do flashbacks without having to resort to flashback tags, as I have always felt they detract from writing.
On the other hand, I sometimes got confused during a scene change, as there wasn't any more gap than between normal paragraphs.

However, they were a delight to read - light enough to be fun, with chapters short enough to not be trudgey. You stayed consistent, and I feel you portrayed characters well.

I disliked Harry's quickish forgiveness of Ginny. I can see why, but still, it didn't feel like normalharry, but that and the first forgiveness are really my only bad points.

Well done, and I really hope you continue to be awesome. Now I'm off to go read the apprentice/j/m series :D

Thanks for crafting

C

Docfox posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd December 2009 12:36am for Epilogue

Damn that was a really good story!

Hocapontas posted a comment on Thursday 8th October 2009 9:46pm for Epilogue

Wow! I loved how you ended this! Awesome story!

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 3rd August 2009 1:14pm for Epilogue

Hah, liked Dumbledore's ending. Wish Draco ended up happy, though.

Liked your story. Recently got the idea into my that Harry/Cho is a good thing, and your stories are the first of this pairing I've read. Still think it's a good thing. :) Enjoyed them a lot.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 15th June 2009 10:18am for Epilogue

And you just couldn't resist ending with a comment about Dumbledore's socks, could you? In all, a great fic. Keep up the fine work on MP, and congratulations on your new daughter.

noreenklose posted a comment on Monday 25th May 2009 11:14pm for Epilogue

A very good story. I enjoyed it very much. The epilogue did NOT say what happened to Vernon and Petunia...can we just imagine something Horrible ? Than you for writing this story. Please continue writing, you do it very well. The only criticism I can think of to help you to improve---You use "organise" endlessly, for everything. You could sometimes use "arrange". I hope that helps you.

KUTGW,
Noreen

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Sunday 19th April 2009 7:37am for Epilogue

Well it wasn't quite enough to make me forgo sleep completely, but it was very close. Excellent work and a nice wrap up.

Tremnks posted a comment on Sunday 14th September 2008 10:28am for Epilogue

Lovedthis story too, I was afraid it would be a bit to sappy for my tastes but the action in the end was amaizing!

LKK posted a comment on Sunday 31st August 2008 5:05am for Epilogue

That was AWESOME!!! First, I have to say that I love your Dudley. For once, he's not portrayed as a fat, lazy, spineless, incompetent boob without a conscience; you made him more realistic, which was a really great thing to see. The epilogue was probably the best part of the story. It's nice to see the outcome of their lives. The children are just adorable. Thanks!

Myrddin Emrys posted a comment on Friday 15th August 2008 10:47am for Epilogue

woohoo socks!

Prasant posted a comment on Sunday 18th May 2008 8:51pm for Epilogue

An awesome set of stories. The whole Shadow Demon plotline was an unexpected but well-written twist. Good job!

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th April 2008 11:31pm for Epilogue

WOW! I have to admit, I didn't see the "Ginny becomes a muggle" twist, but with the other story lines for her character, it's not too far a stretch, GREAT fic!

Rexnos posted a comment on Tuesday 19th February 2008 5:36pm for Epilogue

Wow... A very impressive piece overall. Between this piece and it's prequel, I've been occupied almost not stop for the past two days...

Anyway, I love finding dark, realistic and mature HP fan fiction. You've done a great job here and I can't praise you enough... Though I'll bitch that you've stopped updating Journeyman Potter... I loved that piece...

Regardless, I hope you do come back and read this review at some point, and even more hope that you finish Journeyman Potter... Aside from Ginny's fate, I was completely satisfied from this piece... I hate even partially unhappy endings... Technically she deserved it, but I do like to see forgiveness in the end.

Rex

P.S. - Thanks for making Dumbledore human and failable. It's one of Rowling's quirks I dislike. To his death, Dumbledore is utterly perfect...

David M. Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 6th February 2008 5:49pm for Epilogue

Brilliant set of fics. BRAVO!

zxcvb posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2008 12:35pm for Epilogue

Wow, this fic was truly a breath of fresh air. Not only because this is one of the few decent Harry/Cho stories I have ever found, but also it seems that you wrote this before the 5th book came out, so there is no prophesy, and Harry isn't "destined" to defeat Voldemort, and there is no figuring out what the "power the Dark Lord knows not" is. That alone makes this story very unique.

I must add, too, that your action and fighting scenes are some of the best I have ever read, providing enough vivid details without being confusing or boring the reader by slowing down the pace. That delicate balance is incredibly difficult to achieve.

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Sunday 30th December 2007 6:58pm for Epilogue

I must admit I am normally no fan of Harry/Cho relationships - I feel that Cho is a rather two dimensional character, but the same could be said of most of the possible matches. The way you have done things, while progressing really well from infatuated to dating leaves a little to the imagination about how dating becomes serious. That said, this is one of the best fanfiction romances that I've ever read and am very glad I decided to give it a try.

iluvchocs posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 12:19pm for Epilogue

This was a great story - and I love that both of Harry's kidsa re Parselmouths xD