By Draco664
Reviews
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 20th November 2006 6:11am
Good one.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 18th November 2006 1:57pm
Interesting.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 18th November 2006 1:42pm
Good start.
gunny
slayersfan01 posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 10:58am
I read and mostly enjoyed this fic and its predecessor. It's pretty good and had a good time reading such a long fic even though it is made without any input from book 5 and 6.
One thing really bothers me though, are you a hater of Ginny by any chance? You thoroughly destroyed her in this fic. So much so that I am pretty disgusted by how badly she ended up in life. What was up with that? You treated her horribly throughout this story! I was hoping to at least read here in this epilogue that she at least still stays in Harry and her family's life, but you destroyed that too! What the hell! That was messed up!
ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 9:23pm
Loved the one liners in this feelgood chappie, especially hermione and albus.
I would have thought that ginny would have remained in touch with bill or the twins. And that she would have been better off joining the army (she could go to israel for that, if brits still don't allow women in combat) instead - or in addition to - being an accountant.
Accounting is a great profession, btw - I wish I had done it. You make good dough, keep steady hours, and can do whatever night job you ever wanted.
MiliCoqui posted a comment on Thursday 7th September 2006 4:26pm
wow making Voldy a squib was great!
pulamon posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 4:54pm
great story
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 12:44pm
Wow!
Thankyou.
Brilliant
cmatbmed posted a comment on Thursday 8th June 2006 2:12pm
Great story. I have spent the last couple of days devouring this and it's sequal.
Thanks
bajab posted a comment on Sunday 4th June 2006 7:11am
Excellent. I really enjoyed every part of that, but the epilogues and final summary was the best bit; really brought home how much I felt for the characters.
Thank you and well Done.
Alternator posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 7:53am
Excellent. Rarely does a story make me feel life I've been sucker punched, and most of those rare occassions are here at fanficauthors. I love the way Dudley is portrayed; easily the most creative and well explained path for him to have taken. This also nicely avoids the too-common, overly annoying SUPER!Harry solving every problem; he's strong, but not dominatingly so.
I'm not a fan of Ginny retreating from the magical world, though. Abandoning family and friends doesn't seem like a Weasley thing to do. That's my only real complaint with the story itself, but FOR THE LOVE OF GOD FIX THE FORMATTING!
Justin W. Conley posted a comment on Sunday 16th April 2006 7:45am
You really need to find some way to have scene breakes. Other than that it is quite good.
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 11:50pm
A great story. Thank you so much for writing it. I look forward to more stories from you. I especially like the fact that Dumbledore now has a lot more socks. I hope he has lots of soft warm socks to keep his feet warm!
pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 11:01pm
This is great. I love the "after Voldemort stories. It winds things up so well. I think it is great that Harry and Cho can understand Fawkes and now know they can "see" what the other sees. That was how Cho could see what Harry saw when he was flying home. That and she could feel his joy. It is great she put the pompous young man down that thought all he had to do was show up and ask her to marry him. Cho has grown up. It is great that Harry is so confident in her responses that he can let her do as her father promised with out worrying about the outcome. I look forward to the epilog of this story. Thank you so much for writing it. pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 4:50pm
A great chapter and a great ending to the demon problem, etc. It is sad Ginny gave up her magic but it was a good way for her to atone for her sins. Thanks for writing. pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 4:14pm
Marvelous! What a great way to destroy Voldemort. Thank you so much. Now let's see how you get rid of a Shadow Demon and close a portal to Hell! Thanks so much. pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 3:34pm
Voldemort is going to regret this I'm sure. I have no clue how Harry is going to fight this monster and Voldemort. I can't wait to see how you are going to resolve this one! Thanks, pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 3:04pm
Wow! Harry has really learned a lot. I understand he is still furious with Ginny but he did save Draco and he won't quit until Ginny is safe too. Thanks for wriiting. pms
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 2:35pm
OK. Voldemort want to hurt and capture Harry and is angry that Ginny is not the best bait he could have used. However, Harry will not let anyone suffer Voldemort's wrath if he can help it. No one is going to want to let Harry go but he will. I understand this is going to be bad and hopefully end up good. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of the story.
pms
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 20th November 2006 6:34am