avram posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 9:20am

Phenomenal. Always a pleasure to read your stories. I liked getting to figure out what the other people said, as well as Harry's pragmatic response to the act.

impliedauthor posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 8:36am

Interesting.

Jonathan Northwood posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 8:32am

*laugh* I like. Delightfully done.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 8:05am

Hi Draco 664, You do have a twisted sense of humor that I dearly love. Normally I am not much for short stories but this one is teriffic. Some of these more UA stories are definitely not meant for young people but they are wonderfully amusing and so very well written for a truly adult sense of humor. I think this one is one of the best for reading between the lines and certainly the Harry that you have brought alive is clever and well able to defend himself against a law that should never have been written.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:53am

Very interesting and amusing. It took a moment to figure out that it was always Harry speaking, but it worked well.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:43am

Twisted perverted and demented.

I LOVED IT not to mention the idea of a patil covered in chocolate.

*drools then goes to hide behind in the closet with some baby oil for a bit*

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:40am

Very nice.

001 posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:21am

The only thing that would make this better would be if we could read what the other people are saying

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:16am

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! That was brilliant. Normally I'm a fan of Harry and company just saying frack England and leaving when there is a law like that passed, but your answer is quite brilliant. Outstanding work, thank you.

David Stanley posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:14am

Well done. Harry's lines were great. I was LOL imagining his audiences reaction.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 7:07am

The first marriage law story I've read and quite possibly the only as anything else would probably disappoint me.

A strange style of writing but it worked.

Thanks

Wizard posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 6:50am

There went the neighbourhood

:P

redjacobson posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 5:47am

Loved it! Very interesting style of story telling, but fun just the same.

red

ridgeback77 posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 5:11am

That was great.

Crys posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 4:51am

*laugh*

Oh, that was great. Thank you for a beginning to end laugh-a-thon.

Took a bit to work out that it was only Harry speaking (and that is a very interesting storytelling style), but once I got there, it was all pretty easy to follow after that.

Thank you from the bottom of my funny bone.

Oh, and another H/Padma! Yes!

steviesteveo posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 4:35am

That was a very interesting style of writing, it was funnier than expected for a fic in which so many people die.

Good use of the Wizengamot and truth serum

Thomas posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 4:25am

This is the best fic i ever read, EVER!
Seriously it is.

No i'm not bullshitting you, i would go as far as saying that it is better then all your other ones.

D?

Are you ok?

Hmm, that colour blue isn't really healthy.

DrT posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 3:51am

Took a bit to get into this, but it was well worth the effort!

Andrew2 posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 3:33am

Twisted.

Very twisted.

Whether that's the story in particular or your imagination in general....

...i'll let you decide.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2008 3:05am

You are a very naughty boy!

You are also an excellent writer, and that was a total hoot.

I wonder if Padma, +/- her sister, is going to survive....