Terdwilicker posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2007 4:58am

Wonderful story. Well written, interesting, savage yet logical arguments. While Harry was a lot smarter than as written, it was still satisfying to see him disassemble the flaws in JK Rowling's work.

Shaldana Blackwater posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2007 9:30am

I'm dissapointed that your beta (or whomever) utterly missed the gross misspelling of a major Canon location.

You are spelling Grimmauld Place as Grimwald Place.

Your spelling errors I can forgive, though it would be nice to see them tidied up (sleave for sleeve, etc.), but a Canon name is a Canon name and should be dealt with.

dzio posted a comment on Monday 1st October 2007 4:06pm

A really good story. :) I usually don't like 1st person perspective and most CAPSLOCK!Harry stories get tireing after few chapters, but here it didn't bother me at all. You gave your Harry a really good reason to be angry and his inner voice was brilliantly funny, smart and sarcastic at times. Good work. :)

BTW, I found a spelling mistake in the last chapter that made me stop, blink few times and then laugh my head off. "Enlarded the windows"? Dear Merlin, I thought he was trying to make the place nicer! :D

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 4:02pm

I can't believe I overlooked this the first time I read back in the day -

not "Grimwald" but "Grimmauld." :)

panache posted a comment on Tuesday 7th August 2007 2:17pm

Outstanding story! I enjoyed it tremendously.
You have a small problem you need to address, however. Snape has the Dark Mark on his arm. It has killed everyone else but you have given no reason why he survived. He was an active member at the time of Voldemort's demise so he would have had the same Dark Mark as everyoe else.

DAMNED posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:59pm

GOOD STORY

DaZZa posted a comment on Tuesday 10th July 2007 9:48pm

I have only one beef.

The story says

"but the fact that every person who had a Dark Mark was now a pile of ash was fairly convincing to the rest of the population that Voldy was gone."

If this is the case, how come Snape is still alive to judge Harry & Zab's potion? We all know Snape has a Dark Mark on his arm.

jovan schnee posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2007 7:25pm

I really enjoyed this story. It is well written and quite imaginative. It's so nice to read one of these fics that really does something new with the story and the characters. Glad to see Harry gets his just desserts.

Zane Wyrick posted a comment on Friday 6th July 2007 7:07pm

Nice.

Zane Wyrick posted a comment on Thursday 5th July 2007 1:35pm

Your chapter title is quite correct.
I agree whole-heartedly.

Zane Wyrick posted a comment on Thursday 5th July 2007 12:27pm

Moody's awesome.

Tanthalas posted a comment on Thursday 28th June 2007 7:57am

well globaly a good story but two things :

magic wandmagic at least does NOT require incantations and/or wand mouvements !

anyone with a little logic could have understood this fact while reading HP and the sorcerer's stone

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2007 7:40pm

I'm enjoying your story. Something is not "right" about Harry's anger. He is out of control, even for a young teenager. Speaking of which, I think you've made him too self aware. No one has worked with him enough for him to have overcome the obstacles of life (Dursley's, abuse, etc.). Unless he spent time studying the world he should be less aware of some things.

Decumo9 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2007 7:01pm

sweet story. Seems like Harry did get lucky in the end, after all.

mekareami posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 1:05pm

Good story. I enjoyed reading it and it moved along at a good pace. I look forward to reading your other works. Thank you for writing

kainboa posted a comment on Monday 18th December 2006 7:04pm

great fic, love the ending :P

Jimbocous posted a comment on Tuesday 28th November 2006 6:43am

The first couple chapters were a little rough, but after that this was just great. I'm still chuckling over the final battle, as well as several places where you had a really unique and amusing turn of phrase. Good stuff! Thanks.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 17th November 2006 6:09am

Totally brilliant and very funny, wonderfully crafted and stylishly written. All in all a total joy to read.
Thank-you for all your hard work.

vheritas@aapt.net.au

Lana posted a comment on Tuesday 26th September 2006 6:34am

Eh. I can't finish reading this. Harry is just too annoying.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 23rd September 2006 2:07am

OUTSTANDING STORY!!!! I loved every single chapter of this story, it is awesome and is definitely a story I will be and continuing to reccomend to anybody and everybody:):):):)