Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 10:53am

Oh, oh! Harry has to go up against Dumbledore!?
This is going to be interesting. I'm glad Harry
said what he did to Ginny and Ron. It will help
clear up a lot of things when his friends dicuss it after he and Blaise leave. I expect them to leave together. Please continue! I want to see how you handle Harry dueling with Dumbledore! Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 4:19am

This is an interesting developement. It would appear that Blaise has admired Harry from afar. Things are moving right along. Continue Gung-ga-din! Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 3:45am

Blaise Zambini I presume? This is going to be interesting. I figure they are not going to get along for a while and then that will change? I look forward to the rest of this story. Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 3:07am

Zab Zambini? I've seen his name in other stories. I am curious how you will present this story. Thanks for a new angle. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 2:28am

Wow! Harry finally got through to Snape and Dumbledore and told Tonks some things that she had thought were fiction. Quite and enlightening chapter. Thanks, I look forward to more. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 1:59am

Harry is not doing well. Dumbledore has made a lot of mistakes but he is on the side of right. At least I hope he is in this story. It is never a good idea to assume everyone is out to get you. I look forward to seeing where you are going with this.
Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 1:19am

Oh this is a tough one. Harry is in trouble for using the cruciatus curse against Bellatrix.
It was an aggressive move on his part too. This will have to be handled very carefully. I look forward to more. Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 12:50am

Oh oh! Harry just admitted to casting an unforgivable curse. Let's see what happens now. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 11:57pm

This is good. Harry is taking control of his like and responsibility for his own actions. I'm glad Hermione is there. She is someone he can talk to. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks, pms

Patches posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 11:34pm

Ok. Angry Harry. I can really understand that! Really surprising that Vernon would stop Dudley though. Very well done. Thanks for writing. pms

Aberbadger posted a comment on Sunday 16th April 2006 9:55am

I can understand why you have taken this direction, as I have had the same debate with "Katling" in Schnoogle.com, but for all the characterisations poetic/author's licence allows for, I can not reconcile the idea of Harry EVER agreeing to call someone Master. Master Zab, certainly, or anything along the same lines, but the simple fact of the matter is, not only would Harry refuse to be subservient to anyone at that level - he has an streak of independence a mile wide - he has had too many run-ins with Death Eaters for the term master to do anything other than react with profound sadness and perhapse disgust at the noun.

Sebastian Palm posted a comment on Saturday 8th April 2006 9:44am

You've forgotten to close the italics tag after the letters, about one third from the top of the page. Otherwise, good show so far...

SP

amulder posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 5:42am

Draco, this chapter ("Return of the Dark Lord") is missing the last page of the chapter.

Sebastion posted a comment on Sunday 19th March 2006 10:05am

This was by far the best fanfic I've read since Tempus Fugit 2 years ago

lazarus73 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 2:19am

Fantastic Story. Well-written, well-thought out, and I have always been a fan of a good female Blaise story. It did raise some very interesting questions though, and the sequel will be quite interesting.

ShadeHawk posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 1:39am

Hmmm... didn't Harry attempted to cast Cruciatus curse on Bellatrix Lestrange, but was not successfull?

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd February 2006 10:15pm

Just finished the story.

Very original. It was good to see Harry finally let go of some of that anger, and get on with what neededed to be done.

I enjoyed how you ended Voldie - very original.

Thanks for sharing the story.

Merle Corey posted a comment on Friday 17th February 2006 10:06pm

I have to say that this is a brilliant piece of work. I am a fan of your characterization of Harry, smart and starting to think for himself, but not perfect. Definitely my favourite story!

Thomas4 posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 12:18pm

might want to watch out on the copy right because of Orson Scott Cards books named apprentice alvin and alvin journeyman

Quizer posted a comment on Tuesday 7th February 2006 7:24am

I like the idea of using the press to strike a killing blow against Fudge like that. Different solution than Ruskbyte used in 'Backwards Compatible', but maybe even more effective in the long run.
You know, you do have a couple of spelling errors strewn in between the various chapters, a couple of them rather misleading or embarassing. For example, the use of 'discourse' where you probably meant to use 'discord' in the section where Harry butts heads with Perce. If you need someone to check over your story for these little errors, send me a note.

Quizer