TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 9:13pm

Very good chapter, can't wait to read more.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 8:32pm

Very good chapter, time for some payback.

gunny

Gena posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 8:10pm

Please update soon this is really good i like it alot

Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 4:14pm

grreat chapter - love harry's plan for Draco


the conversation with the basilisk was top notch - - cool and collectedly thanking harry for the meal

thanks so much
warm regards

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 3:09pm

Good start but bit of a bummer.

gunny

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 12:14pm

Great chapter! Very funny, and it was good to see the various reactions from Harry's friends. Glad to see the basilisk took care of Kellerman without any trouble. Not sure what else to say specifically, but I definitely felt that this was one of the best chapters in a very good story. Thanks for writing!
Jay

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 9:54am

First off, I liked this chapter as whole. Ron was a hoot, and the basilisk was interesting. However, I am disappointed in two this time around. The first is Harry declaring that he intends to manipulate Draco into a confrontation, just so he can kill him in "self-defense." To me, that is still premeditated murder. ALL of his friends should take issue with that. Of course, it can be argued that Draco needs no reason to toss an AK or two in Harry's direction. But still, the manipulation factor grates on me too much. It seems like Harry is rapidly devolving into a twisted hybrid of Dumbledore & Voldemort. The second is that you are apparently doing everything to ruin Harry & Hermione's romantic relationship. IMO, Hermione was right to be affronted by Harry's killing of Snape, although she MAY have overreacted. Harry needs Hermione to kick his ass on these types of things, as to me, Blaise is too passively accepting of Harry's darker side. Then there too is the whole "you can't keep secrets, but it is ok for me to" attitude. Harry is being unrealistic and uncompromising. He needs to bend more, or he will break when it comes to interpersonal relationships.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 11:29pm

This is great. Harry has returned but only his most faithful friends know. I suspect that Hermione is pregnant. At least she repents her past actions with Harry over Snape's death. Their shock at finding Harry alive is understandable. I'm glad that Dumbledore hasn't given up on Harry. That was quite a good move on Hermione's side. It makes Harry's death more believable. I really like the basilisk. He has a great sense of reality. I look forward to more of this story. pms

nuclear death frog posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 10:16pm

One error I spotted: Voldemort's wand was thirteen and a half (13.5) inches, not twelve.

Glad this has been updated again.

Alex00 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 8:56pm

Great work.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 7:26pm

Great update! I love the conversation with the basilisk... such a nice touch. Harry playing dead is always fun, and I like how Dumbledore is already mostly expecting it. Wondering what's up with Hermione, but I'm sure you'll tell us in good time. Nice to see a chapter from you!

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 6:11pm

Nice. Very nice. I've always appreciated this series, and the latest installment did not dissappoint. Having said that, I eagerly await your next update. Please make it soon!

IceBlades posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 3:54pm

Aah, nice to see a new chapter. I'm quite curious to read about what has happened to Hermione...and how she and Harry intend to exact revenge for it.

Off to do homework...exams are upon us poor, college folk.

Happy writing!

anonymous5 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 2:29pm

oh, what a lovely chapter. It's like the middle of the fourth movement of a classical or romantic symphony, when we've been exposed to thematic elements and we're presented with a few calmer moments to digest everything and get a taste of what's to come... I can't come up with a better metaphor for the excellent style and tone of your writing. Thanks for the update; I'm very much looking forward to reading your depiction of our heroes going forth to kick ass and take names!

smog2187 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 2:19pm

Great chapter as always, the whole story-telling part was particularly enjoyable. At first I was pretty surprised that Harry would hide his death from Dumbledore but the more I thought about it, the more it made sense.

Thanks for writing

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 2:15pm

Dude!!!! Everytime I read an update for this story I just have to say DUDE!!!! I forgot that he helped the Basalisk escape. That was sweet how they a friendly relationship. Update soon and keep up the good work.

P.S.... Is Hermione pregnant?

riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 1:55pm

Good chapter. I am surprise that Hermione would keep Harry in the dark, that not a good sign for their relationship. Hermione know how much it tick Harry off to be left in the dark, It seem Hermione is just another Dumbledore.

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 1:49pm

Good update. Glad Hermione is back in the story, although I am of course curious as to what happened to her.

As for Harry and his plan, that should be interesting to watch unfurl

"T"

Bedrup posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 1:28pm

Super chapter. For a while there I my favourite suspect as the man behind the plot that killed H:s double was Dumbledore. What was I thinking? You haven ´t bashed him in quite that fashion, have you?

This story promises a complex and inventive plot. Looking forward to reading the rest. Thanks.

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 1:06pm

Revenge is a dish best served cold... I think Harry's revenge will be a lot of fun. I hope he will be successful with it. A good revenge is so satisfying. Thanks for writing. W.