OlorinBlack posted a comment on Thursday 17th June 2010 9:30pm

Hmmm, interesting. Which leaves the question of what next?

Sterling posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 9:34am

This has been a great series of stories. I see it has been quite awhile since you have last updated. If you have quit writing I still want to thank you for giving us this much great material to read. However, if you haven't I look forward to any further updates.

paulmoss posted a comment on Thursday 3rd June 2010 10:58pm

Brilliant story really enjoyed the first 2 parts of this trilogy. Keep up the good work.

zArkham4269 posted a comment on Thursday 20th May 2010 12:55am

You know, it is a cruel bit of truth in fanfiction that the best stories seem to be the ones that aren't finished. =[

goku90504 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 3:07am

Oh Gawd it's a great story i wish it would be continued did she betray him? or did zab find his own way out? or something else?

goku90504 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 2:08am

I covered my eyes as a wave of intense head washed over me.

heat i think you meant right? great stories though i do hope harry gets both his girls in the end even if he doesn't its still worth the read even if i was late to work today because of it

Riegert8 posted a comment on Monday 15th February 2010 8:00pm

This is a good chapter, I could see that Blaise would betray Harry for her Great-grandfather. If Blaise freed Zab and she agree with him then she would start working against Harry, Zab don't agree with what Harry is doing and seem like he go against him. I really don't know if Blaise betrayed Harry for I have not seen anything to prove betrayal, but it does look like that Blaise lost some trust with Harry don't matter if she betrayed Harry or not. To me it seem that Harry is losing the battle since he losing allies, Zab and Blaise used to have his back but now it seem that both are gone and he pretty much alone.

delrusant posted a comment on Sunday 24th January 2010 9:04am

The climax approach, the bigots have begun to really panick halping to create an atmosphere where revolt comes more easily ftom the most numerous non neutral faction. Surprise are sprung and unexpected events occurs but what the truth really is we won't know (like the "I stole from my own fault" surprise).

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 10:14pm

Good chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 8:14pm

Good chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 2:27pm

Outstanding chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 1:12pm

Very good chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 12:07pm

Very good chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 11:22am

Very good chapter, now it is time for some payback.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 10:12am

Very good chapter.

gunny

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd November 2009 4:05am

Blaise betraying him is just too easy an answer . . . No, my guess is that the Ministry is controlling Ron. Hermione betraying him (or under control) is also possible, but I'm going to go with Ron being controlled.

Nice addition to the story. Harry's snarky humor and the banter with Zab all were good reads.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

KittFoxx posted a comment on Thursday 29th October 2009 12:04pm

Just wanted to let you know that I only read slash.....until I started reading this story. I am so impressed with how you have written each character. You make them so believable and the story keeps me on the edge of my chair with anticipation of the next chapter. I have not read the first two installments but as soon as I leave here I'm going to download them all so I can read them over and over. Please keep writing, I'd read anything you write. You got me hooked for good.

KittFoxx

Alex00 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th October 2009 1:05am

Awesome stuff keep it up.

Hawklan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th October 2009 1:39pm

Thanks for the new chapter and I'm looking forward to see what Blaze did or what happend to her.
That the church tried something didn't surprise me.

Richard6154 posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2009 5:48pm

Very enjoyable, looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing