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Aelita posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 5:57pm

I really hope you have another chapter coming out...this story is so good!

KingDark posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 4:17am

well, I really liked the story so far, although the firt person respective can be confusing sometimes.
When you update, I will be posting my review immediatly.
oh, and here and there you forgot simple words, I noticed it several times, but it isn't really annoying.

finally, there is something that can bother me.
anyway or anyways.

I prefer the anyway version of it. the anywayS version can bother me...

oh well, keep it up

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Tuesday 1st January 2008 3:09am

Well. Aside from the ever present complaint about Dobby's grammer - very hard to get right and irritating even when it is correct. Isn't Malfoy dead yet? He certainly has had three run ins with an enraged Boy-Who-Lives, and so has one of the best survival rates of the lot of them.

One hole in your reasoning - I missed where Harry became competant enough with wandless magic to jinx a broom, something I always understood to be reasonably difficult, but I suppose adrenalin could account for many things.

Please update soon, you have left us with something of a cliffhanger after all.

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Tuesday 1st January 2008 2:41am

He's gorgeous.

jpotterny posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2007 4:41pm

a wonderful story, please keep it up as you can. Congrats on the baby.


Jim

Lang posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 8:21am

Hey Draco664,

I just started reading your stories. I've thoroughly enjoyed Apprentice and Journeyman Potter thus far.

I especially enjoy the little conversations Harry has with himself.

This may be a little late but, congratulations on the new addition to the family.

Can't wait for the next chapter,
Lang

smog2187 posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2007 7:58am

I know it's not a proper review but meh...
I'm not sure if you wanted to write "shiza" as it sounded in English, but it's written "scheisse" in German.

Cheers

smog2187 posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2007 4:38am

I originally read Apprentice Potter a couple years ago and found it to be a great read, and just this weekend I found that this sequel and let me say that you have another great story coming along.

Though I didn't like how you made Harry so excessively angry, Snape so damn petty and how Harry manages to "guess" everything that's going on, I'll still keep reading because of the immersive story and great writing style which apart from what I mentioned, depict the characters is what I consider to be an accurate manner.

Thanks for writing

inDe_eD posted a comment on Thursday 29th November 2007 12:51pm

Brilliant as always. I've been reading this fic and its predecessor on/off for a couple of years, and if anything it's gotten better with time.

Best of luck with your child - don't have one personally but from the few times I've covered for more, er, "fortunate" friends they can be quite a handful. I imagine it's worth it an infinite amount of times over, though.

ahsun92 posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 4:09pm

WOW. I have become hooked!
Love it all!
Keep up the good work!

Highschool Nerd posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 4:10pm

Wonderful!

Shaldana Blackwater posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 7:22pm

"I discovered it located in the ruins of the Gaunt house, on the edge of Little Hangdon."

Aggh... the Canon mispellings again. That's just not cricket. Please please please, I beg on a thousand knees, fix the Canon spelling errors and double check against further ones.

Raven69 posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 1:36pm

Just wondering, is this Kellerman related to the Henri Kellerman that Dumbledore introduced as being head of ICW security when woke up at the Vatican?

Are Voldemort's followers now infiltrating the international government and not just Britain?

Jarvey posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2007 10:47pm

It's great to see this story updated... it's quite an excellent tale!

terminator2190 posted a comment on Thursday 11th October 2007 5:06am

hey man nice chapter but keep them coming fst it has already been 25 days!!!!!!

iluvchocs posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2007 6:43am

This story is brilliant XD I love how you've worked in the Horcruxes, and the ways in which Harry's changed work really well. Great job :D

Banner posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 1:21pm

* prayerfully *
Pleasepleaseplease kick Malfoy arse some more!

Bedrup posted a comment on Tuesday 25th September 2007 1:31pm

Great

assassin10000 posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2007 11:03am

Awesome as usual. I'm eagerly awaiting more.

Kortir posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 10:44pm

Hehehe, excellent chapter. This whole thing is enjoyable in general, but this is the sort of chapter that just makes it all come together. Has the feeling of a James Bond movie, just about- Harry's able to go in, do what he needs to do, and get out when he's ready. Awesome.