morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 1:33pm

An excellent and entertaining chapter.
The fight scene in the loo was wonderful, Harry hurting his hand made me LOL.
I look forward to the next installment.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 11:45am

Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. Harry and Hermione, I hope they do get back together that would be cool. But what about Blaise, what will she think of the entire thing of them getting back together? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

razor_M posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 8:46am

I like the title of this story. It's pretty damn cool, the way you explian this whole thing with the Horcruxes, but it also makes my brain hurt trying to remember it all. Please update soon.
-Razor

kainboa posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 6:22am

great chapter as usual, can't wait to see what harry does next.

keep up the great work :)

Darkness posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 4:46am

Enjoyed the scuffle in the bathroom quite a bit. It seems as if all good action movies/novels/stories require a mandatory fight in the loos!

I found Harry casting an Unforgivable on an Auror a bit shocking, but then again his behaviour has been pretty shocking as of late.

It was nice to see Harry and Hermione finally talk. I suspect the situation is not as simple as Harry thinks it is, but maybe after hearing Hermione's explanation, he might be open for reconciliation.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 3:50am

Cheers D! Nice work on this latest chapter. Really enjoyed the bathroom battle, I think every great movie/tale almost has one. :) Excellent job on harry's mental commentary on going and his exploration. Can't wait to see whathappens next and how things work out with hermione and harry. Cheers!!!

Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 11:11pm

Nicely done.

busted posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 9:18pm

Im really enjoying this story keep up the good work :D

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 8:50pm

This just keeps getting better!

csktech posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 8:38pm

Once more, Most Excellent. As I've stated in the past, as long as you keep writing these, I'll keep reading them.

I hope this note find you and you family healthy and Happy.

Kyle

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 7:17pm

Good chapter.

I don't know if it's the first person POV, or what, but this one really gets my heart rate going. :-)

And I think this is the first time I've seen somebody address the issue of *why* did LV wait around so long before resurrecting--other than sheer ego.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

BTW, I didn't get an email notification of this update. Did it not get sent, I wonder, or do I have email problems?

Bedrup posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 12:09pm

Hey, I ´m not all that keen on you bringing Hermione back in. But hey, it ´s your story and if you insist on it I ´ll still keep reading. Liked the auror confrontation.

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 11:57am

Yay! It's always great to have another chapter from you. This is one of my favorite series, both for the action and for Harry's relationship with Hermione and Blaise, which you've handled in a very interesting way. I must admit I was a little disappointed not to see more of Hermione in this chapter, but at least she and Harry are talking again.

I can't wait to find out what Harry's tossing in his hand. I hope that it doesn't take as long to get the next chapter as it took to get this one, but I'll wait twice as long if I have to.
Thanks for writing,
Jay

Crys posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 8:21am

Good fight scene in the bathroom.

I half expected Harry to taunt Partridge with getting caught by the one she held in so little esteem. But as he pointed out, he's learning to be less impulsive. Not to mention he was willing to use an Unforgiveable and so didn't want to admit his identity.

BTW, Harry identified him by the name "Twigg" (or is that some made-up nickname that I don't get the reference to?). Partridge never identified him, so Harry knows something while it isn't immediately obvious how he knows it.

Looks like he and Hermione will be getting back together.

> Such limited thinking.
Maybe, but it's hubris to be convinced you're smarter.

Fun story.

Tero Alanne posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 7:01am

I assume that by Shiza you mean shit? If you look at it phonetically that would be somewhat correct, i and a being pronaunced the way they are in english. But in german it is spelled Scheisse. After six years of studying german in school it's just about the only word I can remember :)

"Such limited thinking".. Next chapter should be good!

amulder posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 5:20am

Ummm, "sleaves" ?? ;-)

Nice to see some of Hermione again. Otherwise, this seems like a 'getting things into position' chapter. So the next one should be pretty intense.

thanks

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 4:13am

Great part here, and the way Harry handled himself in a bad situation first, and then later on with Hermione, in what could have been another one was well done, and do look forward to what will happen when they meet with each other again.

DrT posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 3:49am

Good questions asked about the timing of the ceremony. I hadn't thought of that in those terms.

"T"

sanghamitra posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 12:07am

OOoo.... now thats a cliff hanger. cant wait for the next chapter.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 23rd August 2007 7:53pm

Outstanding chapter! Though you seem to be determined to drag things out with Hermione as long as possible. On the other hand breaking up with her via mirror probably would not be conducive to staying friends, then again, that may not happen any way. It's almost a shame Harry couldn't reveal his idenity to that auror, just to see the look on her face having been shown what a spoiled rich kid could do. What an idiot!